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| 03/02/2017 09:45:45 AM |
Nature Reclaiming it's Own.by JayneRyanComment: Overall, this is good. One thing I would suggest is maybe darkening the foreground a bit. It's currently lighter than the main subject, which pulls the eyes down. |
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| 03/02/2017 09:44:38 AM |
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| 02/27/2017 02:02:10 PM |
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| 02/27/2017 02:01:24 PM |
Orchis Orchids Everywhere - Kew Gardens, Londonby TeddyBareComment: Looks purple instead of red or pink to me.
But what really hurts is the distracting elements. The metal clamp thingy on the left. The bright white blown out areas. Maybe moving around the flower a bit more to find a composition without what I assume is a window would help. |
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| 02/27/2017 01:59:40 PM |
Applesby MonaComment: Oh no! The white balance! If you would have kept the white balance warmer, this would be a stronger image to me. |
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| 02/27/2017 01:59:10 PM |
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| 02/27/2017 01:58:19 PM |
All I need is a good book, a soft blanket, chocolates and sun.by CyrildaComment: Firstly, I can see what you are going for here, and you have something really good to build on. But I would like to offer some constructive input to help take this photo from mundane to more exciting.
1. The lighting here is very flat, and underexposed. Looks like it's just normal overhead lighting with no direction to it. This makes it so the background is just as prominent as the subject.
2. The three objects are competing for attention. I feel like the hat has the most visual interest, so I would focus more on that, while allowing the other objects to become supporting elements. I would do this by changing my position so I was lower to the ground. Then I would use a shallower depth of field to make sure the bow is in focus, and the rest goes out of focus.
3. Finally, I would choose to position the objects differently. In this photo, they all lean to the left, which makes it feel like the right side of the image is heavy. Either the book or the chocolate box tilted the other way would help balance the image visually.
I truly hope this helps you! |
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| 02/27/2017 01:50:30 PM |
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| 02/27/2017 01:49:43 PM |
Lollipopby the_rkpComment: Overall, good direction. Decent light. I think it would be great if you used a smaller aperture to get both the mouth and sucker in focus. |
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| 02/27/2017 01:41:12 PM |
BLOSSOM REDby Gordon_1Comment: When photographing something like this, I like to have my focus hit the flowers nearest the camera. Otherwise, the eyes hunt for what is in focus, instead of being led through the image. |
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