dpcPeohe.jpg
by Bear_Music

Comment by hsteg:
nice job, maybe a little more contrast?

dpcPeohe.jpg
by Bear_Music

Comment by whatdewuc:
For advertisement or architect's portfolio this image certainly achieves the detail of the restaurant/lounge. A client can see the skylights, glass doored entrance, plant filled coziness of the booths to the friendly openness of the bar.

Build a Bookshelf for Homeless Clutter
by Bear_Music

Comment by ahaze:
great resolution, but this feels like a snapshot.

Snip & Press
by Bear_Music

Comment by Bud:
NIce idea, it would have been nice to include all of the scissors.

backlit marsh, summer
by Bear_Music

Comment by 4score:
Perhaps a bit too much saturation...but fairly good for a 5700

Message edited by author 2004-12-31 00:10:02.

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by Bear_Music

Comment by autool:
Composition: 6, Technical: 7, Appeal: 4, Challenge: 9, Overall Calculated Average Score: 7

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Comment by jduffett:
I like the composition, but I think it would benefit from different lighting to get a warmer tone from the wood. Nice all the same though!

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Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings :)

There are a couple items about this image that could use some extra thought. First of all, the choice of the wooden cutting board as a background for this still life may not have been the best one. The diagonals are nice in the composition, but the color or the background doesn't mesh well with the subject. The composition also feels a little uncomfortable with the handle of the scissors missing in the frame. That compositional item seems to break the rhythm within the image. I'm bad about saying this, but I believe this composition would be stronger as a black and white also. That would eliminate the color conflict. There is 'conflict' within the color structure here because your tools have a cool metal color and the board has a warmer feel to it.

Just some food for thought :)

John Setzler

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by Bear_Music

Comment by birdyblue:
The background is a bit distracting but I like your idea and presentation.

Snip & Press
by Bear_Music

Comment by piticu:
clean. i like it. cool background