blurdraggled
by posthumous

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CRITIQUE CLUB REVIEW

So, the task that has befallen me is to critique, of all people, the legendary Pothumous.

Considering your style, and well known skill, lets dispense with most of the technicals. You certainly do not need help with exposure and other basics.

What I see in this image: I like the trio trudging into the frame. However if there were less tilt to the frame, perhaps their effort would be more pronounced. I like the play of light and shadow. But the buildings are a little bit bright for me as they have lost detail, or if there had been a bit of softer focus, then the bright buildings could have worked a little better for my taste. I like the leading line of the hose. It draws my eye back in, when it tries to wander. I might consider cropping the partial building off the left. I don't fe l like it is really part of the story. As is, there is plenty of food for the imagination here. Very nice work.

Waterworld
by jasonlprice

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Clown fish?

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Grain?

Coil and flow
by BrennanOB

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Spring?

Intracellular
by crik

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Leaf?

Have a Guess
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Old paper?

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by PennyStreet

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Jingle bells?

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Battery with built in tester

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Ferro fluid?

Domino Theory
by Barroness

Comment:
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