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01/18/2009 04:10:12 PM · #1
Hi everyone.

Just took these shots tonight and was wondering if you had any comments.
All, good and bad, well accepted.





Message edited by author 2009-01-19 09:23:53.
01/18/2009 04:20:59 PM · #2
Originally posted by helgi:

Hi everyone.

Just took these shots tonight and was wondering if you had any comments.
All, good and bad, well accepted.


I like the top picture better, the pano seems squished, while I think the bigger one gives you nice leading lines. The only question I would have is were is the focal point?
01/18/2009 04:30:11 PM · #3
I put the focal point on the street ;)
01/18/2009 04:58:25 PM · #4
Originally posted by helgi:

I put the focal point on the street ;)


Do you have a link to the larger version on Flickr? I can't tell if it is just the size, but perhaps bring up the fill light to give texture to the hill.

EDIT Never mind, found it on Flickr; looks much better in the larger size.

Message edited by author 2009-01-18 17:00:09.
01/19/2009 05:07:33 AM · #5
//www.flickr.com/photos/helgimyndir/3208671463/sizes/l/

Yeah, here is the link to the big one
01/19/2009 07:50:13 AM · #6
I like the second one better....more panoramic. Makes me want to look over the whole image instead of just at the curve in the street.
01/19/2009 07:59:19 AM · #7
i'd like to see the pano one in a bigger version, the first one looks great on flickr! otherwise great colors and comp, and good job on the processing. sorry, i can't anything wrong with these shots :)
btw were these taken near the crossroad to selfoss in kopavogur?
01/19/2009 08:29:23 AM · #8
I love the top one. I think the lights in the foreground are what attract me. However, I prefer the sky in the second one. Both are beautiful!
01/19/2009 08:54:45 AM · #9
For my money, I'd take the top one. The pano has a great deal of negative space. Maybe a larger version with more detail would sway me. I really like the processing and strong lines in both, though.
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