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Human Wine Aerator
Human Wine Aerator
nstevens85


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Challenge: Leap Day: In The Style Of: Natsumi Hayashi (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-60D
Lens: Canon EF-S 17-55mm f/2.8 IS USM
Location: Arlington Heights, IL
Date: Mar 3, 2012
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250
Date Uploaded: Mar 4, 2012

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Thanks for all the comments and feedback. Will work to learn better lighting.

The wine is actually some red glue on a coat hanger and the glasses have jello in them. So no dirty carpet ;)

Statistics
Place: 22 out of 86
Avg (all users): 6.3394
Avg (commenters): 7.2000
Avg (participants): 5.9556
Avg (non-participants): 6.4393
Views since voting: 931
Views during voting: 517
Votes: 218
Comments: 18
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03/14/2012 01:31:30 AM
Great idea with the cloth, better lighting and reducing those shadows would have put this in the top 5
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/13/2012 05:51:05 PM
Great stopped action; did you have to clean the carpet?? The shadows are a little distracting and focus is a little off, but a nice concept.
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03/13/2012 12:56:00 PM
Very impressive! Not a spot on the floor. Hahah
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03/13/2012 08:01:56 AM
Interesting concept, very intriguing how you executed the shot, love that! Don't love how the man is wearing mis-matching clothes with the woman, and the harsh flash shadow lines. Maybe shoot on a porch in the evening if all you have is an on-camera flash. Very creative though!! Nine for that!
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03/12/2012 02:59:59 PM
Good idea, and really nice timing. I wonder how much wine you needed to clean off the carpet.

If you don't mind, I have some suggestions that could possibly take this to the next level:
* Overall the photo seems a bit dark. More light could help show the details
* There are some definite shadows cast from what I assume is a flash. These shadows are distracting
* I feel like the lady is looking into space, where if she were looking at the glass or the man, that might be more realistic
* The guy's jeans don't seem to fit with the rest of their clothes.

I hope this helps!
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03/10/2012 07:42:08 PM
it's good, haha, sort of double good.
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03/09/2012 07:27:47 AM
That'll make a mess on the carpet.
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03/08/2012 05:26:23 AM
I am impressed by the wine coming out of the bottle. I think it may need for sharpness on the picture, however I love the final result. Good Job
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03/07/2012 07:43:34 PM
Ooh, I'd hate to see the floor!!
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03/07/2012 07:34:26 PM
Such a great concept. Ilike the execution except for the flash shadows. I still
like it a bunch. 7.
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03/07/2012 04:18:14 PM
What a floater! Looks like a very messy image... actually not sure how you got it... must be a towel or some sort of taffy coming out of the wine bottle?

Might crop off some of the ground, as that isn't adding much. If the woman was looking at the man, or at the camera, it might be a bit stronger to me.
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03/07/2012 03:59:43 PM
Nice shot. Not too fond of the shadowing on the walls behind the people, but I like the idea here. ANd please tell me that's a rag or something that LOOKS like the wine is being poured, otherwise, it could have been VERY messy!!!

Good attempt, however, I like it
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03/07/2012 03:44:37 PM
Risky... hope the carpet survived!
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03/07/2012 12:52:26 PM
Oh man, hope this was a one take deal, and your carpet is Stainmaster...
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03/07/2012 11:24:37 AM
This would be my favorite if the lighting execution was adequate. Great idea, though.
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03/07/2012 02:52:10 AM
The carpet! Shadows are a bit distracting but great shot. Great effort on this.
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03/07/2012 02:30:08 AM
haha at the red cloth hanging out the bottle
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03/07/2012 12:35:44 AM
what a risky photography, on white carpet!! Good commitment, I like it
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