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Shot of Bourbon with Grilled Peach and Macerated Blueberries
Shot of Bourbon with Grilled Peach and Macerated Blueberries
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Challenge: Desserts (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC GX1
Lens: Olympus 17mm f2.8 M.Zuiko Digital
Date: Jul 14, 2012
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 320
Shutter: 1/100 sec
Date Uploaded: Jul 15, 2012



[Jul. 24th, 2012 09:08:44 PM]

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Statistics
Place: 39 out of 51
Avg (all users): 5.1795
Avg (commenters): 5.6429
Avg (participants): 5.0333
Avg (non-participants): 5.2299
Views since voting: 390
Views during voting: 235
Votes: 117
Comments: 14
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07/24/2012 09:35:22 PM
You had me at "shot of bourbon"
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07/24/2012 09:51:26 AM
I think the actual colors of this would be nice to see, but this isn't a bad shot at all.
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07/24/2012 09:28:06 AM
Too close cropped and mono not doing it for me.5.
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07/23/2012 04:56:36 PM
The cropping feels like the borders have been shrunk down to just barely fit all of the elements into the frame and no more. The arrangement, the viewing angle, the DOF and the cropping are all very conservative.
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07/23/2012 07:38:45 AM
hmmm, I'm thinking I may have liked this one better in color, would be interesting to see
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07/22/2012 08:44:40 PM
Voted earlier coming back to comment.

Making the food shot as a B&W makes it all so much harder for the photographer to make it visually appealing that one would want to reach in and take a bite. Without the color tones of blue/black of the blueberries and the white of the cream vibrantly contrasting off of the gold-orange of the grilled peach we can no longer 'taste' the image. We need those color cues to fully appreciate the dessert with our eyes and as the image is now we cannot do that at all. The other suggestion I have is that the dessert needs a better backdrop for it to shine as the star of the composition. The grain of the wood is far too distracting and calls attention away from your main subject.
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07/22/2012 06:05:39 AM
I'm missing the color here:( The B&W doesn't make it look very tasty.
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07/21/2012 09:49:42 PM
Reminds me of a certain product photography workshop.

Nicely done.
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07/21/2012 11:29:07 AM
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07/20/2012 02:32:39 PM
Amongst all the lovely color shots a BW does not convey the lusciousness of dessert so effectively
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07/20/2012 07:28:38 AM
This is a tough challenge to vote. I'm torn between "what are you trying to do here" and "what do I expect here". Further complicating matters is the question "what would I do here".

What I would expect would be a technically strong piece of eye-candy that would present the dessert in a way that I would want to at least sample it, if not order it. Along these lines I'm looking at technicals: backgrounds, distracting elements, exposure, sharpness. I'm also looking for creativity, imagination, and originality, which can make up for less than perfect technicals.

So, where does this leave me with your image?

Not for me. I hate the food section of my daily paper, just because they run food photos in black and white. I understand that it's necessary, but that doesn't mean I like it...

Here, I think you have a nice idea that *could* lend itself to some magnificent tones and hues. But, that's just my opinion. If you like it, that's all that matters.
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07/19/2012 12:49:15 PM
I like the idea of b&w, but I think it hurts the shot. It almost looks like a baked potato...

When I read the title, it sounded so warm and wonderful, but it's not at all what I'm getting from the shot -- and I miss it. :(

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07/18/2012 11:12:54 PM
like the B&W over all but very very sharp on my monitor which makes the table top's grain pull more focal attention than the treat. Love te composition otherwise.
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07/18/2012 08:21:30 AM
Color Wheel perfect - Orange and Blue (or a variation on those tones.) Add in the gorgeous golden richness of the Bourbon, and what do you have? A hunger-inducing repast just begging to be eaten.

Or........ you can enter the image as a black and white, and kill the appetite. Sorry, in my opinion, you didn't make a good choice here.
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