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10/08/2004 05:55:46 PM |
Originally posted by panosm:
Great composition. It would have been a 10 for me if it had more "depth". Now it feels a bit flat... |
Originally posted by Amason:
... I think this could have done better as a duotone image with some levels work. Otherwise a well seen motive, I really like it ... |
When I saw the first comment I also thought of trying this in a duotone to add/emphasize depth, adding a cool gray or maybe a light blue to the black. |
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10/08/2004 05:01:21 PM |
| This is a very good image and underrated imo. First I gave it an 8, but I lowered it to 7 after viewing it again (sorry). I like the motive and the composition in it. I think this could have done better as a duotone image with some levels work. Otherwise a well seen motive, I really like it. It should have ended up in 11-15th place imo as it is. |
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10/08/2004 06:59:20 AM |
the lyrics fit perfect to the photo grigrigirl c," )
its pretty obvious that this is not a DPC ribbon photo but who said thats any good?.
I like this alot:) |
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10/08/2004 03:26:17 AM |
You should take more pleasure that for some of us - myself included your intended "In this photo, I wanted the viewer to imagine, rather than "see" worked.
People on DPC sometimes just look at aesthetics rather than what a photo does to them.
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10/08/2004 12:59:36 AM |
I hope you dont mind...but I feel the need to add lyrics to this image. If it bothers you..pm me..i'll delete them. Each time I see this image, I am reminded of the Lyrics to POE..."haunted". A song that touches me deeply...and this is the perfect image to convey such emotion....
Haunted
Ba da pa pa ba da pa pa...
Come here
Pretty please
Can you tell me where I am
You won't you say something
I need to get my bearings
I'm lost
And the shadows keep on changing
And I'm haunted
By the lives that I have loved
And actions I have hated
I'm haunted
By the lives that wove the web
Inside my haunted head
Ba da pa pa ba da pa pa...
Don't cry,
There's always a way
Here in November in this house of leaves
We'll pray
Please, I know it's hard to believe
To see a perfect forest
Through so many splintered trees
You and me
And these shadows keep on changing
And I'm haunted
By the lives that I have loved
And actions I have hated
I'm haunted
By the promises I've made
And others I have broken
I'm haunted
By the lives that wove the web
Inside my haunted head
Hallways... always
I'll always want you
I'll always need you
I'll always love you
And I will always miss you
Ba da pa pa ba da pa pa...
Come here
No I won't say please
One more look at the ghost
Before I'm gonna make it leave
Come here
I've got the pieces here
Time to gather up the splinters
Build a casket for my tears
I'm haunted
(By the lives that I have loved)
I'm haunted
(By the promises I've made)
I'm haunted
By the hallways in this tiny room
The echos there of me and you
The voices that are carrying this tune
Ba da pa pa...
Father :
What is it Annie?
Daughter :
You think I'll cry? I won't cry!
My heart will break before I cry!
I will go mad.
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10/07/2004 11:40:14 PM |
| A bold choice for this challenge. Definitely conveys the message you were seeking. |
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10/07/2004 11:31:42 PM |
| The more I look at this, the more haunting it gets. 9. |
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10/07/2004 11:08:27 PM |
| perfect title...this is a very haunting image. the composition is beautiful and the empty chair gives a feeling of lonliness. beautiful! |
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10/07/2004 10:58:20 PM |
| mixed lighting grabs my attention....... in this vacant but ornate room. Nicely observed setting, and thoughtful composition with the light on and the chair facing a window indicating the "haunting" presence. |
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10/07/2004 10:26:03 PM |
Interesting example of addition by omission.
Message edited by author 2004-10-08 17:48:57. |
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10/07/2004 09:35:57 PM |
| Insane shadows between the windows. nice composition. remindes me of the movie-- "the others" |
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10/07/2004 08:25:56 PM |
| This photo is very strange, something in it has so strong influence, almost disturbing to look at, but I dont know what it is, it's real spooky. |
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10/07/2004 04:28:16 PM |
Strange, voted this a 7 while voting... Now returning for comment and seeing the thumbnail it looks like 3 white dresses of 3 ghosts....
Upping to 8 for making me rethink... |
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10/07/2004 01:44:52 PM |
| Interesting, stark, simple image. I like the symmetry and use of pattern and texture here. I'm not "wow'ed by it, but I think many people might be. Good, solid photography here. |
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10/07/2004 10:59:52 AM |
| this is a wild image. even without the title, it has an erie feeling to it. you can really feel the distance between you and the window. great job. good luck with the challenge! |
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10/07/2004 10:59:21 AM |
| Very artistic - I love the use of the windows and light as shapes in the composition and the placement of the chair and chandelier, giving it just the right amount of balance. I'd like it to be a tiny bit sharper, but still a masterful piece of art. 9 |
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10/07/2004 10:22:15 AM |
| The chair puts this image above average - good photo. |
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10/07/2004 01:51:02 AM |
| This images is great. A high ceiling, gown like curtains with backlight, in this case, outside light. The tones are just smooth. Many amateurs fail with this image because they forget the importance of holding the camera's sensor parallel to the wall. It has a much classier feel then Hotel California. While this image is a great mood setter, it gives the viewer no distinct sense of texture. It is beautiful and leaving a lot to the imagination. Bumping up to 7 |
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10/06/2004 10:50:14 PM |
| Eerie. One of the few photos I've ever seen in which you can almost hear the silence. Focus is a little on the soft side for my taste, but adds a ghostly glow. Just noticed the crumbling ceiling on the top left, which seems out of place in this otherwise well-maintained room. (8) |
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10/06/2004 10:29:54 PM |
This really is a fascinating photograph. Just back for another look….lol
Message edited by author 2004-11-02 13:45:17. |
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10/06/2004 08:31:48 PM |
| I don't like the glare from the hanging lamp and the whole image appears to be out of focus 6 |
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10/06/2004 02:31:36 PM |
| It's probably due to resizing, but it could be sharpened a bit. I like it a lot, it has misterious atmosphere, but I would like to try and leave only the left window with the chair. I wonder how it would come out? |
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10/06/2004 01:57:43 PM |
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10/05/2004 11:46:06 PM |
| 7. I gave bonus points because the image isn't barreled in any way. I wish it was a bit crisper but the mood is well delivered. The frame, for once, helps. |
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10/05/2004 05:30:09 PM |
| I realkly want to like this image - it has some neat features. But - I just don't quite connect for some reason. The empty chair is significant yet seems to be such a small part of the scene. With the strong back light - I'm not sure the lit bulbs do much except draw the eye away from the other nice areas. Finally - a very small point, but the border is overdone for my tastes. Perhaps the reason I don't connect is that it doesn't seem right to scale - if the chair is normal size - the ceiling must be 20 feet. |
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10/05/2004 03:43:39 PM |
| I love the composition and the b/w but it appears to be slighly out of focus. 6 |
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10/05/2004 09:46:20 AM |
| The b/w effect add to this "haunting" peice. Well portrayed, lighting perfect, and shines in the midst of this challenge. Looking at the photography of the "master's" you can almost tell who took what shot. Very well done! (congrats on previous ribbons) ;-) |
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10/04/2004 05:04:25 PM |
| That IS haunting. Great work. |
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10/04/2004 03:42:30 PM |
I actual like this a lot, but don't expect it to be in the top 10. It is a little soft but i think that adds to the scene.
This is the only photo in this challenge that makes me stop and think what is behind this photo, where is it, why is the chair there what is the photographer trying to say?
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10/04/2004 01:28:07 PM |
| the lights seem a bit soft (i'm sure it was unavoidable) but the image is great 7 |
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10/03/2004 04:53:51 PM |
| Very nice softness, though a little on the bbbbbright side...I'd like to actually see the chair more...but great on symmetry and contrast...enjoyed! Thanks! |
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10/03/2004 04:25:28 PM |
| Haunting indeed. One can almost feel the shudder. Great composition. Nice idea. 10. |
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10/03/2004 02:02:25 PM |
| This is an amazingly beautiful shot and without even looking at the title, this is exactly the feel I got from this image. I like the softness of it and the b&w treatment is very nice. |
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10/03/2004 12:10:45 PM |
| Interesting, but up against some very strong competition. |
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10/03/2004 09:27:00 AM |
| Bit too big contrast, makes it hard to understand whats on picture. Still good compozition. |
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10/03/2004 09:00:55 AM |
| Love those (victorian?) windows! Depressed mood and vacant look give this image impact. Well done. 7 |
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10/03/2004 08:46:39 AM |
| Perhaps a little soft, but maybe that is what you were after. It seems to centered also. |
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10/03/2004 06:42:50 AM |
| VERY nice shot, the composition is just superb. My eye is led around the various elements, but never wants to leave the frame. There is a sense of real perfection about the ratios here. The chair is the element that really makes this shot. The frame balances the photo perfectly. Exposure is spot on. I think I'd have liked a tad more sharpness... the blurriness here doesn't quite look deliberate enough. Nonetheless, this is one of my favourites this challenge. Thanks! 10 |
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10/03/2004 03:49:41 AM |
| This is an interesting photo and a good use of space to create an impression. |
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10/03/2004 12:15:54 AM |
| I love the composition of this, but the lighting seems a little harsh, and the clarity a little low. The lone chair.. I dunno, I'm up in the air about that.Also, and you can't really help this.. but the left window, at the top, detracts a bit because of the lack of symmetry. 7 |
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10/02/2004 09:55:20 PM |
| wow lovely photo, i love the solitary chair and this is one photo where i believe that the border adds to the overall effect... i love the tones and the light saturation, i believe this photo should be VERY well placed and i look forward to seeing more of your work once i find out who you are :P :) and if i was to be picky (after sitting here looking at it for such a long time) it would be with regards to the far left window right up the top... the shadows cast or the frame or whatever it is (cant be too certain) is not the same as the other ones and slants although this does not ruin the image it does provide a drawing point to take my attention away from the photo as a whole ( and maybe i just have a short attention span :P) but overall VERY good photo and look forward to seeing more of your work |
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10/02/2004 07:43:43 PM |
| Nice composition. I like the repeating elements. |
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10/02/2004 04:51:32 PM |
| Can see what you've tried to do here, but I think there are a few things that I personally don't like. The lights are still on in the room, it looks like there is enoughlight coming in through the window. The shot seems a little soft, I'd have liked a DOF that makes everything crystal clear. 6 |
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10/02/2004 03:53:23 PM |
| The composition and subject for this image is great. Well done. Focus is a little soft, though. |
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10/02/2004 03:33:08 PM |
| beautifully lit and well composed. I like how the symmetry of the 3 windows is offset by having a contrasting element (chair, chandelier, nothing) within them. very nice. |
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10/02/2004 03:27:54 PM |
| Wonderful shot, very solitary feel. I love the way you composed it and the chair really makes it. Probably would have been better with the light off. |
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10/02/2004 02:32:55 PM |
| Interesting mood. Your picture has a story to tell. |
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10/02/2004 09:22:46 AM |
| I gave this photo a 9. I love the composition. What keeps it from a 10 for me, not at all trying to be critical, is the top of the left window frame has something hanging in front of it. It is a little distracting to me. Nonetheless, a great photo! |
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10/02/2004 06:13:51 AM |
| boringly haunting, a bit blur and flat. intesting composition |
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10/01/2004 11:09:26 PM |
| Nice tension created by the absence of the subject that was or will be sitting in the chair - 9 |
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10/01/2004 08:52:15 PM |
| Great composition and subject but has a 'photocopy' look which takes away from the final result. |
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10/01/2004 08:39:36 PM |
| I love shots like this. The only thing I don't like about this one is the location of the chandelier. It seems to merge with the light windows a bit too much. Not really sure what could be done about that though. The composition including the chair is great, and I like the title. |
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10/01/2004 08:09:15 PM |
| An interesting perspective but it does not have the WOW factor need to keep me interested. It also seems way too soft or even out of focus, not sure wich. 5 |
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10/01/2004 07:27:28 PM |
| Wow! I really like this photo. There has to be some sort of story behind this, I'm just not sure what. Either way, it's one of the ones I would consider hanging on my wall. 8 |
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10/01/2004 06:26:08 PM |
| I think you did a great job conveying your impression of this scene. The b/w, the cropping, the position of the chair all done with precision. Nice job IMO. |
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10/01/2004 06:04:03 PM |
| Hmmm. This picture is very well done. The black and white really work, and the focus is great. I'm giving it a 6 though, only because I don't really understand what it is about. |
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10/01/2004 04:14:50 PM |
| I like the mood conveyed by this image. The empty chair is quite subtle within the overall image. It also works well to counter the symmetry of the windows. Focus feels soft to me. 7 (//www.dpchallenge.com/forum.php?action=read&FORUM_THREAD_ID=129433) |
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10/01/2004 03:55:28 PM |
| Great use of visual repetition to create an expectation for the viewer, only to find the empty chair. Very effective at conveying your emotion from the title. Good contrast and balance, and effective use of long focal length to keep spherical distortion to a minimum. |
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10/01/2004 03:43:24 PM |
| atmospheric shot - too bad they have those modern bulbs in the chandelier (no deduct) - a little too grainy for my preference |
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10/01/2004 02:45:59 PM |
| of all of the wonderful images in this challenge...this one happens to touch me the most. Thank you :) |
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10/01/2004 12:14:01 PM |
Pattern, lines, and the strong sense of balanced "centred" composition are enhanced by the chair and chandelier as pleasing "disruptions" to the sense of pattern and order.
The chair being empty does create an eriee absence! Well done. -8 |
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10/01/2004 12:01:10 PM |
| Excellent use of lighting and perspective to give this the eerie feeling suggested by the title. The symmetry of the windows adds balance and strength the composition while the chair slightly throws off that balance - very nice. |
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10/01/2004 11:20:00 AM |
| I like it that this image makes me wonder what is going on, what is the story behind it. It looks overall slightly soft. Also I find my eyes moving back and forth between the lights and the chair and, considering your title, the chair should maybe have had a more prominent position so it becomes the one and only focal point. |
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10/01/2004 10:57:14 AM |
| This is a great shot, something like I would expect to see in a film. It's a bit blurred but I really like that about it. It's imperfections give it a haunting character. 10 |
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10/01/2004 09:51:49 AM |
| Very nice, different from most DPC shot's i've seen. Great composition, good framing. The chair gives it the extra point. Maybe a bit soft, but I love it. |
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10/01/2004 09:35:37 AM |
| So much emotion - well done, I saw Hitchcock's 'Rebecca' recently, this image recaptures something of the essence of Manderely |
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10/01/2004 08:59:44 AM |
| The displaced molding on top left corner and missing sas on far left drape are distracting. I like the symmetry. The b/w anf lighting definitely relays a haunting effect. |
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10/01/2004 08:15:55 AM |
looks like my living room (yeah right) ... got some ceiling damage over there on the left :)
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blow this one up really big .... i'll bet it's stunning |
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10/01/2004 03:12:34 AM |
| Great composition. It would have been a 10 for me if it had more "depth". Now it feels a bit flat... |
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10/01/2004 02:24:28 AM |
| This is a great B/W. It is somewhat spooky. Great shot. |
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10/01/2004 01:07:26 AM |
| Beautiful windows, really haunting feel to this one. Well titled. |
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10/01/2004 12:26:28 AM |
| Love the spooky-yet-classy mood. Great tones and lighting, very artistic. :o) |
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