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10/20/2004 04:54:32 AM |
Originally posted by graphicfunk: Great work here. By far your best image and you are certainly moving in the right direction. My warm congratulations on your top 20 finish. To get an even higher score avoid borders. I like them, but there is shool everywhere that hate them on principle. Regardless, rejoyce. Good job. |
Thanks for your great comments, what was I thinking with this ugly border? Oh well, Im learning, wont do it next time...heh. Thanks again everyone! |
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10/20/2004 02:09:15 AM |
Great work here. By far your best image and you are certainly moving in the right direction. My warm congratulations on your top 20 finish. To get an even higher score avoid borders. I like them, but there is shool everywhere that hate them on principle. Regardless, rejoyce. Good job. |
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10/20/2004 12:24:03 AM |
Great picture, should have been in the top 3! |
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10/19/2004 10:20:35 PM |
Excellente! Love the smooth feel, the colors, love the models and her expression is priceless!! One of my faves, 10 |
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10/18/2004 05:32:21 PM |
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10/17/2004 01:54:43 PM |
I love the look on her face. |
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10/16/2004 10:57:03 PM |
Excellent expression in the right models face! Great use of catchlights in her eyes. You are very overexposed though blowing out a lot of the detail in both the models tops. If you were shooting for a high key approach, you missed it by a smidge. I see this in the discolored background. Compositionally, the negative space to the right appears to off balance the shot. Cropping with a couple sheets of paper held up to my monitor, cutting off a third of the model on the left (say right behind her ear) and the dead space on the right makes a much cleaner composition with more oomph.
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10/16/2004 12:45:37 PM |
Vdery good picture. The look on her face is priceless. |
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10/16/2004 11:34:00 AM |
Great expressions. Border distracts. |
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10/16/2004 12:40:29 AM |
Her expression is priceless and adds real oomph to this photo. |
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10/15/2004 06:22:28 PM |
Nicely composed and lighted |
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10/14/2004 07:07:06 PM |
Very cute! adorable girls. Looks like they were really in to this project. |
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10/14/2004 04:25:52 PM |
Yep, I like this one. A real change between all these boring pictures of empty cans...
It's not perfect, the background looks a bit wrinkled and the High-key effect looks not realy 100% to me, but I'll score you 8 now, and revisit it later, maybe score you even higher... |
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10/14/2004 01:39:39 PM |
I don't care for the border here. Also quite a bit if the photo is overblown. But you've got great models to work with. Keep at it. |
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10/14/2004 01:22:30 PM |
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10/14/2004 07:54:55 AM |
Interesting shot, but righthand side girl's expression might not need to be so dramatic to convey the theme |
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10/13/2004 08:17:53 PM |
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10/13/2004 03:14:37 PM |
Loved it. Good colors. Great expression. Nice idea. |
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10/13/2004 09:27:12 AM |
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10/13/2004 09:05:40 AM |
Looks a bit overprocessed and the border color is near-hideous. Great expression and poses though. |
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10/13/2004 07:53:26 AM |
I like the expression! 7. |
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10/13/2004 02:48:32 AM |
i normally have no preference regarding borders, but i do find the border on this pic to be distracting - not enough to lower the score though :) |
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