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My Heart's Always In The Wrong Place
3rd PlaceMy Heart's Always In The Wrong Place
JakeKurdsjuk


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Challenge: Something New V (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Lens: Sigma 15mm f/2.8 EX Diagonal Fisheye for Nikon
Location: Lafayette College, Easton, PA
Date: Oct 25, 2014
Aperture: 7.1
ISO: 1800
Shutter: 1/60
Date Uploaded: Oct 26, 2014

Lafayette College Student Center, Easton, PA

I shoot in Easton all the time, and have been to Lafayette, but never in any of their buildings. This is a back staircase in the center of the building. Loved the green heart at the top.

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Place: 3 out of 63
Avg (all users): 6.4545
Avg (commenters): 7.8571
Avg (participants): 6.2647
Avg (non-participants): 6.6047
Views since voting: 1063
Views during voting: 155
Votes: 77
Comments: 17
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11/12/2015 06:25:16 PM
Hi Jake, Andi here from the Critique Club (a little late sorry).

Wow, wanting a critique on a ribbon winner! I do like this image and think this colour is often boring but it all goes well together, the heart (as mentioned) is a little gem. You have managed to keep the lights and windows from blowing out and that always helps.

There are plenty of shadows available but they are all a bit soft and I wonder what the image would look like if they were darker? Ideally you'd have captured the heart somewhere along the rule of thirds but doubt you had the room to do that and keep the effect as it is.

I'm really nitpicking now but the shadow bottom left distracts me a little and on the right there is a sliver of window frame that could have been removed by moving an inch or 2.

Congratulations on a(nother) ribbon ;)

11/09/2014 11:56:23 AM
That heart on the top is perfect!!! Congrats on the ribbon!
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11/03/2014 10:14:47 AM
Congrats on ribbon #2. Stay on a roll :)
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11/03/2014 07:54:59 AM
Very nice and congrats on the ribbon.
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11/03/2014 06:59:19 AM
Looks like you are settled in now and ready to steal all those ribbons. Well done!
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11/03/2014 06:21:24 AM
Congratulation for the ribbon. Super!!!
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11/03/2014 05:53:39 AM
Originally posted by Cuttooth:

Two ribbons in row for you. Great job.


Thanks. Not going to see a trifecta. LOL
11/03/2014 05:19:10 AM
Two ribbons in row for you. Great job.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/02/2014 07:06:27 PM
Beautiful composition and exposure. One of my ribbon choices.
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11/02/2014 09:18:09 AM
Awesome.
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11/02/2014 06:28:23 AM
wow! this is a creative one! I like it :)
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11/02/2014 03:23:51 AM
I like the geometry of this image.
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11/01/2014 11:17:41 PM
Very cool architecture there. Perfectly exposed here, and excellent composition.
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10/30/2014 07:40:13 PM
Nicely taken and good POV good detail and composed
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10/28/2014 01:39:41 PM
I love the pattern.
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10/27/2014 09:58:18 PM
I love this. Such a subtle, tiny subject
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10/27/2014 02:21:24 PM
great lines

then I read the title and LOL
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