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Challenge: Jewelry Advertisement II (Expert Editing*)
Collection: Portfolio
Date: Oct 27, 2014
Date Uploaded: Oct 27, 2014

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Place: 20 out of 35
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Avg (commenters): 5.2857
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Votes: 105
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11/06/2014 11:18:26 AM
The pile of stuff is to busy and none of it seems to really be in focus. Would have been more effective if you had something tack sharp with a really small DOF and everything else blurred. Like move the charm from the bottom left up and had it in perfect focus.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/05/2014 08:36:07 AM
Nice edit - really nice. I just wish the entire photo was sharp throughout.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/03/2014 09:48:52 AM
Nice - well arranged and good looking design.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/01/2014 09:54:15 PM
For a jewelry advertisement, the jewelry has to be tack sharp! I struggled to read the lower left words... and I'm disappointed since I like everything about this "ad" except for the photograph. But... it's a photography challenge, in the end.

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  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/01/2014 05:25:21 AM
Slick graphic design, but the photography element lacks the crispness that I feel the design needs.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/31/2014 04:56:36 PM
Interesting idea, nice graphics. But the cropped hoops really wrecks it for me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/31/2014 12:11:04 PM
Having so many bracelets gives a busy feel, and the focus seems a bit off.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/31/2014 08:19:59 AM
I think your layout somewhat takes away from the product itself. Good effort though.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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