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07/19/2015 06:02:37 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
First impressions, your shot has impact and meets the challenge well.
We have your title to help us understand what this once was, so that helps us appreciate it more from the outset. I like your composition with the soft focus repetition of another similar structure in the background. There is part of me that would like to have altered the composition to move the front one further to the right and avoid cutting off part of the distant one but this is something I would have tried purely out of interest to compare results.
Your choice of aperture has certainly isolated the subject from the background but that background is where I'm having some problems, its shapes and areas of overexposure are distracting me to the extent that is competing with the turbines themselves. Looking at the lower half I'm thinking this is water reflections? Given your lens, again I would have liked to try with both maximum aperture to hopefully have just colours without any detail or a smaller aperture to bring out enough detail to avoid the distracting confusion I have at the moment.
The colours and detail in the front turbine are key aspects of this image and it works well but I feel is tending towards being over-processed but that is just a personal thing. As previously implied I feel its position is a little too central and would benefit from positioning further to the right.
Well done its a respectable score, your image has been very well appreciated by your commenters, thanks for submitting, Sid |
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04/02/2015 11:26:43 AM |
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04/01/2015 08:00:47 AM |
| I really like this, the colors and background. |
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04/01/2015 12:37:40 AM |
| Gorgeous connection of yore. |
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