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09/20/2003 10:39:44 PM |
| wow...great overhead shot...good rich color.... |
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02/04/2003 09:36:01 AM |
Comment:
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) I find the layout of this photograph to be very strong. The spiral of color and the off center placement of the center of it all add to the power of this composition. I am so glad you did not center this, that would have made it into a bullseye.
(2) BACKGROUND The background is very dark, which make the bright colors of the windows really "pop". Perfect background exposure.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL The focus seems just a trifle soft on the windows. Did you hand hold the camera at 1/30? Did you try this with a tripod? I think just that little change might have moved this into ribbon contention. You also might try this shot with a smaller aperture. That would add to the DoF and more of the windows would be in sharp focus.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL Your post processing is very good. Saturation is good, cropping is perfect.
(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE This photo does a very good job of meeting the challenge. I love the colors and the feeling of movement from the spiral.
(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO The subject here is fantastic. The way you executed it is excellent. There is much to see here and this is the sort of photograph that can hold my attention for a long time. This is a wonderful photograph! |
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02/02/2003 10:45:27 PM |
| stunning! love the colors! |
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02/02/2003 04:29:12 AM |
| A most wonderful picture with wonderful colors. 10 |
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02/01/2003 10:31:46 PM |
| I love the patterns here and great use of light, one of my top pics this week |
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02/01/2003 08:54:09 AM |
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01/31/2003 10:18:23 PM |
| Breathtaking in every aspect: color, composition, lighting and subject. One of the top three for sure this week. Congrats on an amazing shot! |
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01/31/2003 07:07:15 PM |
| Wow, very cool. I'll be interrested to find out where this was taken. |
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01/31/2003 02:16:46 PM |
| I love these spiral shots. The only minor thing I might want to change is to darken up that glow just a little, which I know was likely difficult due to the setting of the shot. |
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01/30/2003 02:45:51 AM |
| Very lovely. Perfect composition and beautiful colours. I won't be surprised at all if this ends up in the top 10 (but then, I'm often wrong). |
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01/30/2003 12:08:40 AM |
| Wonderful effect here. Like the spiral. Nice job. |
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01/29/2003 10:57:44 PM |
| This is a great shot. That's all I can say. Good luck. |
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01/29/2003 09:31:37 PM |
| Where is this I would like to visit it some day? The lights at the top are a little distracting but that can't be helped, I also like the way you off-centered the pic. this is far more pleasing than dead center. The old rule of thirds comes into play again. The architecture and color make the image, Good shot and good luck. John Gill |
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01/29/2003 05:27:12 AM |
| Great colors and grat framing. Very well shot photo. My favorite of the week so far and most of my voting is done - Inspzil |
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01/28/2003 10:33:39 PM |
| one word, well three words.... ooh laa laa! I like it.. nice nice work |
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01/27/2003 05:16:25 PM |
| Excellent job! Just love it. |
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01/27/2003 01:02:02 PM |
| Man, that must be beautiful in person. Good capture. They make 'em like that anymore. Good luck. Jacko. |
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01/27/2003 02:30:43 AM |
| where the hell is this? what a great photo! |
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01/27/2003 01:27:43 AM |
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01/27/2003 12:27:14 AM |
I almost submitted this same shot! Glad I switched at the 11th hour! Had fun shooting on Saturday, guess we need to discuss what we're submitting so this doesn't happen again.
That being said, nice shot, a little dark and might stand a bit of a unmask sharpen. I like your composition. |
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01/27/2003 12:15:26 AM |
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