Greetings from the Critique Club!
Lovin the details of the board's graphics, the slump of his body, his tats, hair and the sheer exhaustion on his face say it all. I think you could have cropped out or even better, cloned over the border of green at the top, it does nothing for the shot but draw the eye there, and nothing's happening. Would have helped to fix that skew of the horizon, too. Finally if you had just tracked him for another second or so, pretty sure that board would have lowered at some point and then we could have seen his full profile. Here, he's partly hidden by the board and it just doesn't work :-/
Hope this has been helpful, feel free to PM me
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