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South Haven Light (circa 1872)
South Haven Light (circa 1872)
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Challenge: Historic Landmark -- The Old & The Beautified II (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D800
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-200mm f/2.8 VR DG IF-ED
Location: South Haven Michigan
Date: Oct 29, 2015
Aperture: F4.5
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/1600
Date Uploaded: Oct 29, 2015

This lighthouse (first lit in 1872) is currently under restoration (see this link; //www.southhavenlight.org/). You can see the chain link fencing added to keep the people away from the lighthouse while they are working on it (obviously not this day!).

I took this photo during one of our October Gales on Lake Michigan. The water was very stirred up from the big waves scrubbing the bottom. A little more sunlight would have been nice... but not always possible this time of year in Michigan.

Statistics
Place: 13 out of 40
Avg (all users): 6.0429
Avg (commenters): 7.5000
Avg (participants): 6.0800
Avg (non-participants): 6.0222
Views since voting: 311
Views during voting: 127
Votes: 70
Comments: 4
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11/06/2015 07:31:52 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Very nice shot, great crashing waves over the lighthouse and the breakwater/railing/lights line leads the eye straight there. Love the glowing red light in lighthouse, automatically leads the eye to a focus point.

But I think it would have done much better in Seascapes and Landscapes, as this is what it looks more like than a tribute to a recognized historic landmark. Here, the lighthouse is diminished by all the natural forces happening around it. It's playing a supporting role, not the lead. If you look at the front page and what won and placed in the top 5, you can see that the subject just fills the frame. DPC voters tend to be a very literal crowd; they want to see a historic landmark in all its glory, you better give it to them!

I know you were working with ambient conditions, also my favourite to work with. I think cropping out the sand on the lower part of the frame would have helped, you could have left just enough for the seagull to play in :-)

Feel free to PM me

Susan
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/03/2015 10:21:52 PM
I really love it Give 8
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11/01/2015 02:05:42 AM
Amazing shot.
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10/30/2015 04:55:49 PM
What great capture! Poor ol' seagull seems a bit 'lost' ! :-)
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