Hello from the Critique club
An excellent image that meets the challenge very well
What a great concept Marcel, I hope you’ve patented the idea, it could take the world by storm! Seriously though it is a great and, as far as I am aware, original idea, the colours of the pencils are perfect nice and vivid against the more sombre background. Isn’t it interesting how your two commenters differ so much on the lighting aspect, personally I think you’ve made a good job of it, the lighting is nice and even but it does lead me on to my minor criticisms. Its down to that all important attention to the minor details, it would have been even more impressive if all of the tips of the pencils had been perfectly level and also the lighting on the blue pencil, the yellow next to it is casting a shadow on it. Like I say, they are only minor but they are important.
Well done Marcel for submitting another excellent entry. |