Greetings from the Critique Club!
So we meet once again,  docjonny...hehehe...;-)
This is an intriguing shot with the frozen water droplets and trying to capture the spray. This kind of shot is very difficult to get, so kudos for trying! However, the dam(?) over which the water is flowing is huge and dark and has dramatic shadows and is in focus so it immediately dominates the composition; when I see the tiny little white villa in the background, it is only because the brightness draws my eye there...then it returns to the dam.
The thing to do here is to move a bit so the spray from the water obscures the villa, but to get the villa in focus as much as possible. Either that or try different subject matter, some photogs would simply position a nude or bikin-clad girl behind the main fall of water and use that:-)
Again, a good effort at meeting the challenge, but this seems to be a case of biting off a little more than you can easily chew.
Hope this helps, please keep entering!
Susan |
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