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Tears and feathers by Mellilot
Tears and feathers by Mellilot
IreneM


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Poem (Standard Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D700
Lens: Nikon AF Micro-Nikkor 60mm f2.8D
Location: My kitchen
Date: Aug 27, 2016
Aperture: 16.0
ISO: 500
Shutter: 1/125
Date Uploaded: Sep 1, 2016

Tears and feathers by Mellilot

Let me fall into tears,
they can be my company,
land in a sea of feathers-
fly away fly away fly away.

I saw you dove like,
now the greasy back of a crow,
flaps lazily away-
And the sun falls down
While the moon looks on
Mourning for the friend it found.

Written May 8th, 2004

Statistics
Place: 4 out of 62
Avg (all users): 6.5254
Avg (commenters): 8.2857
Avg (participants): 6.0345
Avg (non-participants): 7.0000
Views since voting: 606
Views during voting: 124
Votes: 59
Comments: 10
Favorites: 1 (view)


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AuthorThread
09/11/2016 05:47:34 PM
Congratulations on the HM, Irene. This serene & peaceful comp looks great on the front page.
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09/09/2016 08:09:31 PM
I thought this was you.

I'm glad it is. :D

Lovely. As usual.

Congratulations, friend, on your HM!!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/09/2016 12:10:33 AM
Love the tones.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/08/2016 04:05:33 PM
Nice play of words to fit the image and it does. " She felt the tear spill over onto the feather below...(Ha ha) beautiful image
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09/06/2016 08:44:20 PM
I love the soft colors.
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09/06/2016 07:36:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful! Unsure of the crop, but still a 9.
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09/06/2016 05:02:17 PM
The mother swan despairs.....her youngest gone.

She tried to save her.....the fox was too quick....

She flailed, shreiked, attacked as best she could...

But in the end all that was left was......tears and feathers.
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09/05/2016 08:13:11 PM
love the down & the purple tear
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09/02/2016 01:11:48 AM
Top 3 for sure. Very nice.
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09/02/2016 12:59:59 AM
Wonderful capture and revelance to the challenge ❤️❤️
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