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11/25/2016 03:32:17 PM |
Hello from the critique club
An appealing image that contributes well to the challenge
I actually like her expression, it probably is a little more annoyed than quizzical but it is very appealing and adds a sense of mystery to the shot which has to be good. The bokeh whilst interesting is also very dominant particularly with the bright orange and bright yellow colouring, I think I would have preferred to see a good mono conversion of this to tone down the dominance of the bokeh. Given the expression and the bokeh Eugene I think you actually missed a good opportunity here through composition to combine the two much more effectively as though she were actually seeing it for herself and reacting to it. |
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11/25/2016 12:54:51 AM |
| love the expression. bokeh balls aid. |
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11/24/2016 11:44:52 PM |
| Good candid, expertly captured. |
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11/24/2016 10:55:09 PM |
| I love the bokeh. I wish her expression were something more enticing to look at. |
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11/24/2016 10:02:38 AM |
| Taking in consideration that this is minimal photography I think you should have done much better with this subject. It looks as if you just took a snapshot to show it was minimal but you could have done much better even if this is a candid shot. Minimal just means very little edit. This would have done better in B&W. I'm giving this a 5. |
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