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02/21/2003 08:36:27 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Composition
This is beautifully composed shot the eye is led right into the image to the little lass at the end! I hope someone went to her rescue!And the various elements of the photo are well balanced within the frame
Exposure: Contrast & Color, and focus are spot on!
Suggestions for improvement
Perhaps play with the brightness and contrast and see if you can get even more tonality into the scene. And Please do away with the pink border it is a detraction and distraction from a lovely photo! |
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02/18/2003 01:55:45 PM |
| Sonja, your b&w work is so beautiful. This is such a wonderful, well captured of these future ballerinas. I especially like the little girl on the end who looks like it's time for a potty break. |
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02/17/2003 03:18:45 AM |
| Realy nice shot, was in my top 2 this week. congratulations. |
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02/16/2003 01:05:59 AM |
| Good shot. Maybe the real perspective is the last student - "When you have to go, you have to go." |
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02/15/2003 09:44:47 AM |
| Pretty. Brings back hideous memories! I love the grainy black and white, although the pink border kind of undermines it a bit. The composition is great. |
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02/14/2003 03:44:12 PM |
| I love the nostalgia this picture depicts. Great framing. Was the little one at the end needing "to go?" hehe. |
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02/13/2003 07:15:41 PM |
| Great photo! The rose border really adds to the delicacy of this scene. I love it!! |
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02/13/2003 06:40:10 PM |
| beautiful! awesome lighting. even tones. look how the girl on the far left is looking into the photo... further enhancing the eye's lead in along the rail and wall. skip - skip - skip along the line of girls whose heads and toes further lead you to the last little girl on the end.. who looks like she has to pee! LOL how darling! what a moment! beautifully captured! |
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02/12/2003 07:13:18 PM |
| I love this shot. The black and white is perfect, excellent contrast, good lighting, and the subject(s) are adorable. |
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02/12/2003 10:18:36 AM |
| This is such a cute image! I just don't care for the pink frame it pulls me away from the image. Great shot though! |
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02/12/2003 01:00:49 AM |
| cute, does the girl in the back have to go to the bathroom? This looks great in B&W, great choice. |
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02/11/2003 07:25:25 PM |
| Really nice shot. I might have cropped out the last girl on the right along with the distracting background behind her. The only thing I don't like is the border. I think it kind of detracts from the shot. |
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02/11/2003 05:41:54 PM |
| I like this shot. The lines (baseboards and handrail) work well. I like the BW, nice tones, but not the border. Good DOF. The kids are really cute, especially the one at the end. She looks like she needs to go pee real bad. |
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02/10/2003 06:47:56 PM |
| Lovely work.....just very good. |
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02/10/2003 06:05:49 PM |
| lol. Thisis too cute. Very nice interpretation of the challenge theme. One thing: please change the border. Would work better with only black and/or white. Good luck. Jacko 8 |
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02/10/2003 04:45:20 PM |
| Very cute shot! I hope the girl at the end on the right was able to make it to the potty in time :) |
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02/10/2003 03:01:52 PM |
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02/10/2003 01:36:33 PM |
| I like almost everything about this shot. Great composition and focus. Perfect in b&w. Just one thing: I think a b&w shot should have a white or black (or both) border not this colour. Just a detail. Overall a great job that gets high score from me. Good luck! |
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02/10/2003 11:47:20 AM |
| I really love this photo and the frame choice. The b/w choice is wonderful ! It looks like the girl on the far right has to tinkle :) That just makes this photo so cute ! = 10 |
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02/10/2003 09:37:48 AM |
exellent photo. well done. exellent interpritation of the challange
might have even worked in color. well done |
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02/10/2003 01:13:54 AM |
| very nice perspective soni It's gotta be a winner.I love the border |
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02/10/2003 12:51:46 AM |
| This is a great shot for perspective and I'm giving it a 10. The black and white along with the composition of this shot is excellent. Your border is very distracting from your image. Since the border color has nothing to do witht eh image and is not supported by any color in the image, it IS distracting.. be careful with that :) - setzler |
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