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Lost in Time
kirbic


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Time Passing (Advanced Editing II)
Collection: Challenge Photos
Camera: Canon EOS-10D
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: Santa Monica, CA
Date: Nov 14, 2004
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/2 second
Galleries: Emotive, Candid
Date Uploaded: Nov 15, 2004

Taken at 3rd Street Promenade, Santa Monica, CA
Equipment:
- Canon 24-70 f/2.8L lens @ 70mm
- Hand-held (braced against a tree)

Edits:
- Surprisingly few...
- Cropped
- USM
- Cloned out a couple minor distractions from left side of image
- Curves (selective)
- Dodge & burn a couple small areas
- Hue/saturation
- Resize
- Save for Web

Statistics
Place: 147 out of 155
Avg (all users): 4.2955
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 4.2529
Avg (non-participants): 4.3371
Views since voting: 1151
Views during voting: 265
Votes: 176
Comments: 2
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
06/05/2006 02:32:14 PM
Wow, I always love going back and looking at people's earlier work. You have truely come a long way since the beginning. This shot is pretty true to the challenge, but as time passes... hahah.. it sure puts things into perspective :P
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/25/2004 05:07:52 AM
Connection with challenge theme: apparent, symbolic, concrete.

Technical merits: Focus is inadequate, and slightly overexposed. Color is somewhat problematic with a strong reddish cast in the shadows and greenish cast in the highlights. Shadows lack detail due to overwhelming dynamic range.

Artistic merits: Couple conveys your message very well. Some unnecessary and distracting elements in the framing to the left and uppermost edge. I think a different angle may have served you better.

Overall: I like your approach (concrete symbolic) to this challenge theme. The execution was somewhat flawed on technical grounds, as well as artistic grounds as outlined above and points were taken from both arenas.
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