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Music in the Air
Music in the Air
gintay


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Challenge: Contre-Jour VI (DPL4 WK2) (Standard Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark IV
Lens: Canon EF 16-35mm f/4L IS
Location: Sentosa Boardwalk
Date: Jul 6, 2018
Aperture: 16.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/400
Date Uploaded: Jul 7, 2018

 Is a Musical Wire-mesh Sculpture

Statistics
Place: 59 out of 141
Avg (all users): 5.5684
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 5.5432
Avg (non-participants): 5.7143
Views since voting: 259
Views during voting: 148
Votes: 95
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0

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 07/18/2018 02:25:47 AM
Originally posted by CNovack:
Voted earlier coming back to comment.

I love the gold hues of the setting sun and how it illuminates this wire frame statue of a person playing an instrument! The music of a sunset serenade fills the air. I do have two suggestions on how you can make this composition even stronger. Get lower to the ground and shot at a lower angle looking up at the wire statue if you can. What that would do is make more of the statue appear more prominent in the sky portion of the frame and push the land, buildings and the ocean lower to the ground (at the feet of this statue). The other benefit from getting that low angle is that now you would have the sun level with the head of the statue. Which is in a perfect position to move the angle such that you could you can place the setting sun within the head of the statue.


Thank you Novack for analysing the POV. Greatly appreciate your suggestion.

cheers
gin
 07/18/2018 02:23:45 AM
Originally posted by JulietNN:
his is a fabulous shot. But this is the thing with statues, people see them as statues, not your own work and it has been dinged so many times. But this is good. I am no expert, but I would have taken out the cable cars. A 7 from me.


Thanks Juliet for your comments & pointers. Good suggestion on removing the cable cars. I never thought of that. Appreciate very much.

cheers
gin
 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/16/2018 06:22:54 PM
Voted earlier coming back to comment.

I love the gold hues of the setting sun and how it illuminates this wire frame statue of a person playing an instrument! The music of a sunset serenade fills the air. I do have two suggestions on how you can make this composition even stronger. Get lower to the ground and shot at a lower angle looking up at the wire statue if you can. What that would do is make more of the statue appear more prominent in the sky portion of the frame and push the land, buildings and the ocean lower to the ground (at the feet of this statue). The other benefit from getting that low angle is that now you would have the sun level with the head of the statue. Which is in a perfect position to move the angle such that you could you can place the setting sun within the head of the statue.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/11/2018 12:56:37 AM
his is a fabulous shot. But this is the thing with statues, people see them as statues, not your own work and it has been dinged so many times. But this is good. I am no expert, but I would have taken out the cable cars. A 7 from me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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