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02/28/2003 02:16:54 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
The composition of this is wonderful. The curves of the yellow are so graceful and "flowing," and the stem of the flower leads into the shot nicely. It almost looks like the stem of the flower is pushing the glass.
TECHNIQUE
Great work. I like that the flower is primarily silhouetted. This helps to really boost the contrast of the picture, and I like the simplicity of the colors in the shot. Very nicely done.
OVERALL EFFECT
This is the kinda of "abstract" that I like. It is different enough so that it doesn't just look like any old picture, but at least part of it is identifiable. This would look good on the wall of a townhouse or modern apartment, I think. Maybe a series of them in different colors, even.
Good luck in the future. |
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02/23/2003 12:14:45 PM |
| Very nice original photograph. I really like that you used a curvy vase instead of just a strait up and down plain old vase. The curvy lines really adds to the photo. I also really like the almost silhouette look of the flower. Not quit a silhouette to the point you can actually pick out some detail on the flower. Good luck! |
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02/22/2003 08:12:02 PM |
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02/22/2003 07:25:28 PM |
| Very interesting photograph. It is very beautiful and mysterious. Love the composition. Very artistic. 8 |
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02/22/2003 06:39:42 PM |
| interesting curves and patterns. I like how my eye dances and sways along with it. nice work! |
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02/22/2003 04:43:46 PM |
Awesome shot! The abstract yellow thing works perfectly with the grey flower. I like the way which you incorporated these two subjects together (the leaning idea). Nicely done.
Message edited by author 2003-02-24 14:10:09. |
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02/22/2003 06:11:58 AM |
| Nice original abstract idea! 9 |
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02/21/2003 11:58:19 AM |
| I love the curves in this shot... the desaturation works very well here... great shot :) - setzler |
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02/18/2003 05:56:18 PM |
| I would say you need to darken this up a bit to create more of a silhoutte of the flower. Also, a lowering of the contrast might help with the spots that are showing on the vase. |
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02/18/2003 12:04:05 AM |
| Cool and nice shade of yellow. Would look good without the flower too, I bet. |
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02/17/2003 05:55:45 PM |
| Interesting shot..I like it. |
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02/17/2003 04:08:25 AM |
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