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03/25/2003 11:20:30 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
I think the composition in this shot is "scattered" but has a lot of potential. The randomness of the colors is great for keeping the eyes moving, but then they just settle on the faucet. I imagine that is because the faucet looks a little out of place to me. I would recommend cropping it so that just the sponges, no faucet, filled the frame.
TECHNIQUE
The colors here are awesome. So many times the darker colors all look black, but here they are distinguishable. It looks like the sponges have been "stabbed" and have dribbled all of the soap! My only suggestion would be to get a lot closer. Get right down near the sponges so that the texture of them and the bubbles are nice and visible. I think doing that would have given your shot a lot more visual, and immediate, impact.
OVERALL EFFECT
This looks like a fun shot to set up. It's colorful and thus "happy." Nice work. The faucet really doesn't fit in it though, for the reasons mentioned above.
Good work and best to you in future challenges. |
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03/22/2003 06:49:19 PM |
| Wow, psycodelic! Good colors |
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03/22/2003 03:25:57 PM |
Would be even better without the tap but I still really like this.
Great idea - kinda like a kid's painting with style (that's meant to be a compliment not an insult btw!). Love the colours. Well done. |
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03/19/2003 06:40:32 PM |
| Somebody had fun. Very cleaver idea! |
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03/19/2003 01:53:05 PM |
| Is that just food coloring? I wonder if this is how Jackson Pollock got his start. Cool idea. |
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03/19/2003 12:41:25 AM |
| Creative use of color. I think it would be nicer without the faucet. It gives it away too quickly. It would be a little more of a mystery without it. Just my opinion. BUT.....I like it. I've done a little sponge art myself. I like yours. |
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03/18/2003 07:46:46 PM |
| Might be a little too colorful and busy. |
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03/18/2003 12:02:39 AM |
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03/17/2003 05:26:17 PM |
| Very creative... not sure if you should have left the faucet in the pic or not. And maybe brighter lighting would be nice. |
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03/17/2003 12:47:33 PM |
| WOW - very original and attractive in an unusual kind of way. 8 |
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03/17/2003 10:42:05 AM |
| I think it's creative. Wish the colors had more light on them. |
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03/17/2003 03:48:17 AM |
Well, it's in the kitchen sink, so I guess it Meets the Challenge.
Lots of color. Nice and Sharp. Tap is in Focus.
Visual impact in Stunning to say the least. |
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