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11/09/2005 09:09:14 PM |
*Critique Club*
What an interesting idea, great concept under the transparency category. I like that you were brave and put yourself out there, I think that is awesome. The subject is great, I love the combining of two subject like a woman and science. The first thing that hits me from the image is your shirt. The texture draws away from the subject just a little bit, I would have preferred a basic t-shirt either white or black. Also there seems to be a little bit of a line above your head on the left side, some one commented on possible window sill in the shot. I really love the warming feeling in the background color, it almost looks like a perfect backdrop. I think you did a great job I would have scored you higher then what you received. Good job. |
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11/06/2005 11:43:28 PM |
Returning for comments:
This has that mural feel. An outstanding study. Returning for a bump. |
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11/06/2005 09:46:55 PM |
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11/04/2005 07:07:07 PM |
I would like it more with harder contrast +30 in PS.
I know that that would blow out some highlights but under the advanced editing rules you are allowe to correct for that with the history brush. |
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11/02/2005 08:02:16 PM |
| Yay, a true transparency sub mission, well done |
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11/02/2005 07:44:40 PM |
| Your photo gives me a 1970's kind of feel. A shot that would have been in an Astronomy magazine. Good transparency, and creative. |
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11/02/2005 02:33:52 PM |
| This is quite a striking image, although I feel that it could do with a bit more contrast. Also, there seems to be quite a lot of haloing around the underside of the telescope. |
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10/31/2005 10:02:53 PM |
| Well, I'm not too sure I like the composition. The subject has too little interaction with the telescope. Why are the two in the same picture? and why is she transparent? the technicals are nice though. |
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10/31/2005 07:51:38 PM |
this strikes me more as a reflection image than a transparent image...
i love the look of strength on your model's face. |
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10/31/2005 04:45:48 PM |
| I would have cropped the photo more on the right... But great photo! |
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10/31/2005 02:45:28 PM |
| Wow, is that real. The woman almost looks like a painting. Cool. |
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10/31/2005 08:58:14 AM |
| I like this shot very much. Although I am wondering what is that in the top left cornor of the frame. |
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10/31/2005 01:12:17 AM |
great image! only thing I would change is clone out the lines in the top left (windowsill?)
very nice tho- 7 |
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10/31/2005 01:12:07 AM |
| this is a reflection isnt it? I'm easily confused ;) I like the look on her face though.. the emotion is transparent to me :) |
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