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07/21/2006 05:31:56 PM |
what a nice&funny concept\
beautiful use of 'dooie ruimte' ook
well done |
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04/29/2006 03:22:30 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Loved it in the challenge, love it here. Thought it was creative and well executed with an interesting PoV.
Composition:
Works very well. Clean and appealing.
Subject:
Can miss it and the white bg couldn't go wrong.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
All good. Materful techicals.
To grow its vote?:
Hell, you tell me :-)
Summary:
Good entry for this challenge. Keep up the good work.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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04/23/2006 06:45:14 PM |
| This is really nice, love the perspective. Can't help but think it would be a tad better if there were something on that tray. |
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04/23/2006 04:12:58 PM |
| A little to omuch white space on top. A bit more sharpness in his face would be nice too - but I enjoyed this shot. Great angle |
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04/23/2006 10:36:41 AM |
Too much negative space for my taste. Nice overall composition though!
TC |
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04/21/2006 08:24:21 PM |
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04/21/2006 06:25:53 PM |
| Weird perspective, it makes him look rather flat. Interesting effect. |
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04/21/2006 08:13:31 AM |
| I like this one, I just wish his face didn't look distorted. A 9! |
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04/20/2006 10:50:26 PM |
| I love that britcom, and this picture is ok, but his hair is a mess. |
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04/20/2006 08:18:13 PM |
| Nice photo. Would work great as a stock image but as a portrait I just don't know. |
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04/20/2006 07:59:32 PM |
| really coool perspective for portrait....9 |
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04/20/2006 09:51:51 AM |
great use of negatine space and all that stuff.
different than the usual portrait.
excellent.
my favorite so far. |
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04/20/2006 12:10:56 AM |
cute, almost funny take. The model has a cute, and almost natural expression on his face, nice!
good use of negative space, actually - tho I think it's a love it or hate it kind of thing to some people. White is a good choice too.
Message edited by author 2006-05-17 23:48:04. |
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04/19/2006 05:29:03 AM |
| this looks like a stock photograph, nice prespective. |
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04/18/2006 11:16:42 PM |
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04/18/2006 09:17:21 AM |
| Something on his plate would make the photo better and maybe if you have placed him a little bit further from the corner. It's good though. |
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04/17/2006 09:11:52 PM |
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04/17/2006 02:27:09 PM |
| Very nice picture, nice use of negative space. |
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04/17/2006 11:54:22 AM |
| Very cool, although I would have liked to see it just a tad bit closer to the subject. |
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04/17/2006 08:19:40 AM |
| I love the angle, tilt and perspective on this shot. Very cool and fun. The lighting and white backdrop are very well done as well. The only thing that detracts for me is the black tray/light yellow shirt/black apron. My eye sees the tray first, and then down to the apron and misses his face. Regardless, this is one of my favorites. 8 from me. |
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04/17/2006 08:16:53 AM |
| Nice angle and use of negative space. -8- |
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04/17/2006 07:48:33 AM |
| great work! love the perspective. Well done, hope you do well with this... |
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04/17/2006 07:34:42 AM |
not recently. ;)
great portrait |
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04/17/2006 05:27:07 AM |
| Good pose, good composition and good different idea. The neutral space is everything to this pic - well done |
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04/17/2006 03:14:34 AM |
| Great shot! Good angle - good colors and a great idea - 9 from me |
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