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05/20/2006 08:13:09 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
First off, always try to include some info about the shot in the Photographer's Comments section. It really helps out when we know what the photographer was thinking and what equipment/lighting/etc. were used, especially when you request a critique.
Camera Work/Technical: This image is very nicely focused, but you have areas of both under and over exposure. Reading the comments, most liked the framing that you used here, but it really hurt your overall exposure.
Lighting: This looks like a very harsh lit time of day. That also contributed to the overexposed sky in the capture. Perhaps an early morning or late afternoon capture of this same scene would yield better results.
Composition/Content: While the natural framing you used is very interesting, the composition is almost too centered for me. I also think that I would have cropped that shadow off from the bottom that is falling on the street.
My Opinion: This fits the challenge very well, and I think that it met its full scoring potential. With some different lighting and a little cropping, this one would have probably scored in the low 6 range. Nice capture. |
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05/16/2006 10:37:31 PM |
| I love the way you framed? this. Beautiful |
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05/16/2006 06:03:48 PM |
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05/15/2006 11:05:21 PM |
| ancient and deserving of the term holy in some kind of way. i like the composition as if there is an alternate view. perhaps behind. windows are like eyes of the soul. |
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05/15/2006 09:10:46 PM |
| Is the dark area a cardboard cut-out? If so could have had cleaner edges. Nice effect, though. I like it! |
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05/14/2006 01:29:17 PM |
| The idea is cool because it forces the viewer to look through the old and see whats preserved. Nice use of composition. |
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05/11/2006 07:39:59 PM |
| Wonderful subject and I love how you have framed it with the silhouette. Good job! Your highlights might be a touch overexposed but you still have good colors so it is a tough call. Love the photo. |
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05/11/2006 06:46:39 PM |
| fantastic composition, too bad there wasn't more visual interest in the sky at that time ... nice job! |
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05/11/2006 08:48:05 AM |
| Beautiful. Love how you framed out the temple. |
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05/11/2006 04:57:10 AM |
| Fascinating place, captured well through the frame. |
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05/10/2006 11:14:23 PM |
| I really like how you framed this. |
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05/10/2006 08:03:59 PM |
| Very nice framing, I like it! |
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05/10/2006 07:52:37 PM |
| Nice framing. I love the shape of the opening. |
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05/10/2006 06:45:03 PM |
| I can't wait to read the back story on this one. |
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05/10/2006 06:28:57 PM |
| I really like your framing of this but the photo doesn't seem to be in focus. I also wish you had tried to come up with a title. "Untitled" seems like a cop-out to me. |
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05/10/2006 05:17:45 PM |
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05/10/2006 04:01:30 PM |
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05/10/2006 02:04:10 PM |
| Nicely framed. a bit blown which is too bad. 6 |
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05/10/2006 02:56:00 AM |
| top part is a bit overexpose but I still love this shot |
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05/10/2006 01:04:33 AM |
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