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In the Shower
In the Shower
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Challenge: Self Portrait IV (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Lens: Canon EF 17-40mm f/4L USM
Location: Norman, OK
Date: May 18, 2006
Aperture: f/9.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/200
Galleries: Portraiture, Nude
Date Uploaded: May 18, 2006

 Lots of post-processing... crop, color balance, levels, dodge & burn, minor cloning, unsharp mask, selective blurring, selective sharpening.

Statistics
Place: 117 out of 236
Avg (all users): 5.8592
Avg (commenters): 6.2143
Avg (participants): 5.7500
Avg (non-participants): 5.9539
Views since voting: 1165
Views during voting: 438
Votes: 284
Comments: 17
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 06/01/2006 07:39:53 PM


Critique Club

My first impression is that this is very dangerous because what happens if the camera gets wet. Nice image. Color seems a little off because normally we tend to think that shower walls are white. But the case could be different for you. I like the focus and composition. My attention immediately goes to your eyes and that is where you want someone to start IMO. The water also has a nice motion blur to it although a little lost in the shower wall at first. The DOF I think is a little off and your elbow takes away from the photo. I would say either make the DOF so that the elbow was in focus or crop it out. I think cropping it would hurt it more so my opinion is to try again and put everthing in focus.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/25/2006 01:12:39 PM
Love the colour!
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 05/23/2006 07:24:56 PM
Great shot. I like the expression in the eyes. 8
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 05/22/2006 07:46:02 AM
cool ... intriguing look
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 05/20/2006 06:23:39 PM
cool shot, border works well
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 05/19/2006 10:49:15 PM
One thing I love about SPs is their sometimes brutal honesty and the way they often tend to have a sense of humor about them at the same time.
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 05/19/2006 10:38:56 PM
I like the water drop on your shin...good work
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 05/19/2006 08:32:28 PM
someone is trying to be sexy...love the droplets except for the dangler on your chin ; )
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 05/19/2006 06:14:30 PM
Cool shot, the water really adds a lot to it.
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 05/19/2006 02:33:12 PM
Nice shot :o)
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 05/19/2006 10:40:49 AM
having trouble with the colors.. green?
 05/19/2006 07:27:35 AM
I like this shot my only niggle is the elbow in the front of the shot very distracting and draws attention away from your nice face!
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 05/19/2006 06:57:01 AM
Blue toning works well, direct eye contact is very striking... Nice one.
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 05/19/2006 03:28:53 AM
Macho ansd sharp. Good lighting
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 05/19/2006 01:54:35 AM
Oh man - how embarassing to have a paparazzi catch you in the shower like that! ...oh wait... ;-P
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 05/19/2006 01:16:18 AM
Whew, nice crop :-)
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 05/19/2006 12:32:30 AM
The drop off of the chin bothers me a bit, but I love the colors, and the feeling of intensity.
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