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06/22/2006 12:47:44 PM |
Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice blue! My eye is drawn to the lock, the bolt, the black vertical line, then the shadows
Composition:
I like the fact that the lock and bolt are not centered. The lighting really works well with the blue and the paint texture.
Subject:
Meets challenge, but the shadow was not the main point of interest.
Technical:
Despite what others said, I find it a bit grainy. Given the light I’m surprised you used ISO800. You didn’t include any post processing comments so I’m not sure what you did, if anything.
Summary:
The blue and composition really carried the shot. Congratulations on your 71% placement. Supports your goal!
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06/16/2006 01:33:03 PM |
Challenge: SHADOWS III
Description: Creatively capture a shadow
Advanced Edit
Sahdows, color and texture
Fit: Clearly meets the challenge 1
Aesthetics: Well composed, aesthetically pleasing 2
Simple but effective with the blue of the wood really acting as a great backdrop
Technical: Technically OK 1
This is let down by a lack of detail in the latch, padlock, hasp and handle where the shadows are too dense
Wow: Real impact 2
As an image this one caught my attention straight away
Total Score = 6 |
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06/15/2006 04:33:11 PM |
| great job :) very nicely done. 7 |
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06/15/2006 07:25:18 AM |
| Wicked colours and angle. |
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06/13/2006 03:56:55 PM |
| Too much focus is set on the lock and not the shadow. I do like how you caught the photo of the lock off center. Most people would put it squarely in the middle. |
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06/13/2006 10:02:04 AM |
| excellent...sharp as a tack and vivid colours...love the light and shadows 8 |
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06/12/2006 11:13:38 PM |
| Name sums it all up beautifully done.. 9 |
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06/12/2006 07:48:39 PM |
| Like the lines and great blue color |
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06/12/2006 07:27:08 PM |
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06/12/2006 04:09:37 PM |
| I like the color a lot. I'm not too sure if the rest is quite gelling for me as a creative visual statement. I think I would like this better [iwithouti] the shadows actually. The shadow create more distraction then asthetic appeal for me. |
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06/12/2006 01:26:51 PM |
| Love the bold colour and the comp of this. |
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06/12/2006 10:36:59 AM |
| Very stark and clear. The blue pops out. Nicely done. 7 |
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06/12/2006 10:35:46 AM |
| I like the way the shadow of the pull handle reveals its shape. |
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06/12/2006 09:01:01 AM |
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06/12/2006 02:46:30 AM |
| Nice. What is the whitewash, bird droppings? |
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