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09/03/2006 02:11:40 PM |
*Critique Club*
Hi Jeremy!
Your pic was given to me to critique. As I always mention before critiquing, I'm in no way a pro at this. I only like to look at pictures and to take some pictures.
How your pic made me feel. Well, I don't have any snake phobia, so this isn't a factor, so no fear from me! I felt power. Snakes are all muscle! That thing could squeeze the crap out of you! I feel a sense of control. The snake is resting, but in control of it's environment. It knows exactly what it's doing.
What I like about your photo: I like the colors, the lighting and the textures of the scales. I like how your green goes from light to dark making the animal even more mysterious. I like how we don't get a scale to let us know how big it is. It looks enormous, but we can't say for sure.
What I like a bit less: The DOF is just a wee bit off. I would've liked to see it's face in focus. I like the OOF body though, as again it gives us the impression that the animal is BIG. I also feel the image is a bit of a shoehorn to fit in the Challenge.
All in all, it's a great pic with rich colors, humbly portraying a magestic creature.
John
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08/27/2006 03:30:19 PM |
| Love the tight framing and rich tones! |
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08/26/2006 01:53:49 PM |
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08/25/2006 02:00:19 PM |
| Nice....great color!! I love the in-your-face angle - works perfectly!! 10 |
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08/24/2006 12:29:27 PM |
| That face is great! The focus is enough of a problem for me to be a distraction. |
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08/24/2006 12:19:11 AM |
| Very nice photo of a snake. In a macro challenge I'd vote this higher. But here, I don't see the connection without the title, and I prefer photos to tell the story with the title as a little extra. 4. |
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08/23/2006 06:57:45 PM |
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08/22/2006 06:35:42 PM |
| I think I'd like more DOF. The OOF section in the upper left commands too much of my attention. It's a nice idea, although you rely somewhat on your title. 5 |
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08/22/2006 04:04:57 PM |
| 5: the DOF is too tight and I also think the link to the challenge is a bit tenuous |
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08/22/2006 08:09:57 AM |
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08/21/2006 08:51:49 PM |
hm... excellent shot, a bit of a stretch to fit it into the challenge, you will definately suffer in your rateings for that.
Technically, the photo is awesome. I would have liked to see a little less harsh DOF, but it does add something more to the photo. |
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