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09/26/2006 05:22:40 PM |
Thoughts from Ecce, with his critique club hat on
First off congratulations on 6th place with this shot Arnthor! now, this critique should be interesting as the shot scored higher than any of my challenge entries, maybe I'll learn more than you will from it lol.
Composition
Whilst I like the composition (a lot) I tend to agree with several voters that either the angle could be changed for more impact or (my preference) have the full focus on the red beaker and a lower angle.
Technique
I've never used dry ice but guess its not the most willing of props? The primary colours work well for the liquid and the idea of creating different 'effects' of the reactions shows attention to detail.
Aesthetics, Challenge effectiveness
The idea was inspired and obviously fits the challenge well. Pity it was basic editing and you couldn't clean up the niggly spots.The dry ice seems to get lost in the foreground and another reason why I prefer just the red beaker, the foreground effect there is perfect. A deserved 6th place, I didn't vote in the challenge but if I did I'm thinking a 7.
Nice one
Andi |
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09/21/2006 06:15:35 AM |
| Congrats on the 6th place Arnþór, great shot! |
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09/20/2006 04:14:25 PM |
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09/20/2006 05:44:59 AM |
| Congrats Arnþór on your high finish. Great shot! |
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09/20/2006 03:30:24 AM |
| Til hamingju með 6ta sætið, þessi hefði nú líka geta passað í grunnlitakeppnina á ljosmyndakeppni.is |
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09/18/2006 09:21:13 AM |
| What can I say, this just rocks. 10 |
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09/14/2006 10:50:19 PM |
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09/14/2006 10:20:06 PM |
| This has the possibilities of being a "Super Cool" effect. It appears that your excitment rushed you when there may have been a better shot with a slight change in lighting or angle. Either way, good work and good luck! 6 |
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09/14/2006 09:14:54 PM |
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09/14/2006 02:00:27 PM |
| I wish there was a bit less smoke but still very cool |
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09/14/2006 09:45:18 AM |
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09/14/2006 09:25:38 AM |
| Very nice colors, and cool looking chemical reactions. Great job! |
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09/13/2006 11:40:16 PM |
| Nice use of color and dry ice |
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09/13/2006 11:31:21 PM |
| really, strange! tell us, what did you use and didn't that explode in you bathroom? :) |
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09/13/2006 09:32:20 PM |
| little touch much smoke, but very nice capture and colours. |
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09/13/2006 03:45:33 PM |
| superbly done, great colours effects!! |
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09/13/2006 02:47:26 PM |
| I assume your using dry ice, I like the effect. |
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09/13/2006 12:34:09 PM |
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09/13/2006 10:23:19 AM |
| Excellent!! Great colors and the smoke and bubble are perfect!! Nicely done! |
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09/13/2006 10:08:27 AM |
| Nice clouds forming there. I wonder if you had some other shots to choose from? I like the red beaker and the yellow one - but the other one lacks something. |
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09/13/2006 03:22:36 AM |
| might have been better to show only one glass, would prefer the red one |
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09/13/2006 01:19:36 AM |
Cool effect !
Did you think about making this with a black background, I recon it would have been wicked.
I think having all 3 glasses is perhaps a bit too much, just one would have made the image alot stronger, I think. |
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09/13/2006 12:48:45 AM |
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