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10/07/2003 09:11:50 PM |
| Good Set-up-- Definite Irony.. |
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10/07/2003 08:06:18 AM |
| would be better with some blood |
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10/06/2003 10:48:27 AM |
FYI - No need for the lengthy title.
Pros:
It's not an Iron. :)
Should have the date on the lottery ticket, instead of the "10,000,000 Winning Ticket".
It's an off balance shot (much more white) with the only real element of contrast being the soap dish.
The ticket is in the center of the image (why would he have it in his hand?)
Overall, I think it's a 3. Better placement and cropping would have yeilded you a higher score.
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10/04/2003 02:15:41 PM |
| lack of creativity, too much alanis |
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10/04/2003 11:58:57 AM |
| if it wasnt for the title i would be stumped as to if it was a person lying face down in the bath... gr8 image though |
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10/03/2003 10:12:42 PM |
| The position of his arm doesn't look natural, it isn't believable that he is suppose to be dead (which I assume is what you are trying to convey) Maybe him laying in the tub with the ticket lying next to it would have been more effective,. |
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10/03/2003 03:31:23 PM |
| good effort. I would make one suggestion to show more of the upper torso of the main subject and straighten the shot a little. Just a thought. Nice work. |
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10/03/2003 12:23:23 PM |
| Good angle, lighting is ok. |
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10/02/2003 03:02:09 PM |
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10/01/2003 07:08:20 PM |
| base 1: 1/1; challenge: 1/3; technical: 1/3; aesthetics: 1/3; total: 4 |
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10/01/2003 05:51:51 PM |
| A good idea. Very ironic. the composition feels awkward to me. I'd like to crop at the left and get to see more of what is above the top edge. It would help the viewer follow the idea of the picute better. Perhaps a little more light at a different angle too? |
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10/01/2003 05:15:42 PM |
| heh. was he 98? I'd like it slightly more if the composition was more...straight I think. ie. the line of bathtub and tiles formed a stright line and the curve of the inner bath was not there at the top. that's just me. |
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10/01/2003 01:51:52 PM |
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10/01/2003 09:23:37 AM |
| Not a bad idea - it would be ironic. |
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10/01/2003 07:48:20 AM |
| total alanis, but the photo quality is and tones are good. |
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10/01/2003 06:51:05 AM |
| How morbid! Good idea though. I love the sepia toning. |
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10/01/2003 02:26:10 AM |
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