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... the boyfriend blues ...
roz


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Challenge: Black and White Portrait II (Advanced Editing V*)
Collection: 2006/2007 - CHALLENGES
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Tamron AF 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di II for Canon
Location: at home
Date: Jan 9, 2007
Aperture: F7.1
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 1/400
Galleries: Emotive, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jan 8, 2007

 aLi, my daughter, had just had a fight with her boyfriend .. and she wanted to go to the shops with me NOW!!
i thought i only had four hours to submission deadline and had decided not to enter anything ... i changed my mind ...
so i asked aLi if i could take a few shots of her for the challenge ... she said ok ... the few i took looked pretty ordinary on the camera .. they were still unimpressive when downloaded .. put one or two in photoshop and was still unimpressed ... then realised that in my hurry i'd left the iso on 1600 so i wanted to take more photos, but didnt have time ...

did a suggestion of vignette in the raw program and desat .. converted from raw ... big crop, darkened hand coz it was much to light and contrasted very badly with her face, resized, tiny bit of kodak airbrush, selectively sharpened her eyes, hand and a bit of hair, did another vignette, then erased a bit of vignette so there was a suggestion of her hair on the top right hand side ... added a wide black border on the left hand side ... saved for web...

then i realised i had another day before this was due!!...
think i'll leave it in anyway .. might get a 5.1000, coz if i like it, which i do, then the voters wont!!!

Statistics
Place: 56 out of 491
Avg (all users): 6.2381
Avg (commenters): 7.5500
Avg (participants): 6.1575
Avg (non-participants): 6.2994
Views since voting: 1696
Views during voting: 445
Votes: 294
Comments: 34
Favorites: 4 (view)

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AuthorThread
 07/30/2007 09:09:58 PM
I like this shot. Shows so much emotion of being outta of it :)
Ive had the Girlfriend blues, I know how it feels and this is exactly who one gets. :)
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 02/15/2007 09:41:59 AM
I'm sure glad the voters like this as much as you and I did. I think its beautiful! The lighting on her face is so soft. Unbelievable that this was taken with a 1600 ISO! You can see the touch of "anxious" in her eyes that your story tells, which is always so nice to have such strong expression in a photo. I hope her boyfriend and her made up. I'm assuming they did since I saw a later photo of him washing your car :) Yayyyy.

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 01/29/2007 07:49:07 PM
wow this should have placed so much higher, awesome black and white, I love the eyes and the dark background...

I really love everything about this is one of my favorites now...

awesome job!!!!!
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 01/29/2007 05:08:47 AM
The sharpness in th eyes is superlative. The lighting is impeccable, i dunno how i missed this when i saw ur portfolio
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 01/25/2007 05:27:30 PM
oh shes too young for such distractions. Great emotive image !
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 01/19/2007 01:59:24 PM
Wow Roz I think this is my favorite of yours. Sharp where it should be and soft at the same time. Great capture, nice tones and excellent catchlights in her eyes.

Congrats for your 6.x go get more ;)
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 01/17/2007 03:22:30 AM
Way to go Roz. Another 6+ score. Keep up the good work.

Q.
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 01/17/2007 02:03:44 AM
Just gorgeous, Roz! You did a great job and a nice finish. well done! Beautiful eye's! Why haven't we seen more of them! : )
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 01/17/2007 12:13:49 AM
You were wrong Roz, the voters liked it and I can see why, your daughter is lovely!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/16/2007 05:42:27 PM
Very nice job here. The only thing that bothers a bit is the stray hair coming in between the eyes. The lighting is fantastic. Good job.
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 01/16/2007 12:11:21 PM
Very nice lighting and great clarity in her eyes. You've done a nice job capturing an emotive portrait here. Good luck in the challenge.
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 01/14/2007 11:53:40 PM
Nice lighting & composition. 8
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 01/14/2007 03:16:29 PM
Beautiful job! Excellent lighting!
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 01/14/2007 01:04:19 PM
An emotive shot, I like it.
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 01/14/2007 05:31:41 AM
beautifullllll..
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 01/13/2007 03:03:28 PM
Nice emotive portrait. Back to bump you up to 8.
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 01/13/2007 11:51:29 AM
beautiful eyes 8
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 01/13/2007 09:05:03 AM
Excellent. I give this a 10, and it should be top 25.
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 01/12/2007 10:31:53 PM
Pretty, I like the vignetting
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 01/12/2007 09:34:37 PM
Nice pp. Only thing IMO her eyes look busy with that catchlights.
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 01/12/2007 12:26:36 PM
Hauntingly well done. 8
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 01/12/2007 12:48:08 AM
Excellent work. What kind of light you used?
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 01/11/2007 02:57:11 PM
Love the eyes!
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 01/11/2007 12:32:10 PM
Wow!
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 01/11/2007 11:38:08 AM
The eyes tell all. Nice job
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 01/11/2007 02:26:17 AM
I like the emotion with this one.....
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 01/11/2007 12:44:20 AM
reflection inthe right eye spoils an excellent shot
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 01/10/2007 05:55:23 PM
I understand your going for the dark moody feel with this but I think adding more contrast would have highlighted her eyes more and more emphasis to the drama you were looking for.
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 01/10/2007 02:03:40 PM
Beautifully executed, and the post-processing really draws the focus squarely to the eyes.
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 01/10/2007 12:48:35 PM
the eyes are brillient!
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 01/10/2007 08:47:34 AM
Nice feel to the tonality of this one. I like it.
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 01/10/2007 04:53:05 AM
Very nice. It may be a bit gray, and I don't like the up-nose aspect, but the atmosphere of the picture makes up for these minor issues.
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 01/10/2007 01:09:50 AM
Elvi? This is very different from you. The vignette works really well. Good luck. Sorry to hear about your blues...
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 01/10/2007 12:25:11 AM
pppphhht. boys suck. love the shot. beautiful skin! 9
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