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03/03/2007 02:30:39 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
For me, the image is a bit too busy. You have a man reading, a woman walking, a big gnarly tree with lots of branches, and it looks like a building in the background. I think it would've been better with focus on one of these subjects.
Also, the image is a bit flat on the darker side. Learn to play with your levels, and curves when doing black and whites. It will help make your images pop more. |
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02/24/2007 09:49:53 AM |
very nice moment!! maybe I would like to see it without the woman on the background, or maybe if she was a bit more to the right? it would also be cool to see his expression more clear, I think he might have had a really cool expression there! |
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02/23/2007 03:02:35 AM |
Lots of WOW factor in this. I love the lighting on the person sitting in the bench and the kind os surreal feel to it |
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02/22/2007 05:56:43 PM |
interesting location. i wish the windmills were more prevolent. the other passerby seems more of a distraction to me than a useful character in your scene. |
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02/21/2007 05:54:13 PM |
Umm, why woud he be writing about mills? |
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02/21/2007 11:27:53 AM |
Shot taken a second too soon.composition just isn't as strong with the man and woman almost merging. |
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02/20/2007 05:36:08 PM |
Im a little confused about the title. And this isnt really a street... |
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02/20/2007 01:49:06 PM |
good execution, picture could not hold me too long to explore |
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