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A Small Glimpse Into Nothing.
A Small Glimpse Into Nothing.
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Challenge: Negative Space III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot SD800 IS
Location: Pottsville, PA
Date: Jun 17, 2007
Aperture: 5.8
ISO: auto
Shutter: 1/400
Galleries: Cityscape, Urban
Date Uploaded: Jun 17, 2007

 I had taken plenty of shots for this challenge all day, while touring the Yuengling Brewery in Pottsville PA. On our way home, while walking through a parking lot, I noticed this abandoned building. The contrast of the brick against the sky caught my eye... and the tiny window built into the larger (former) window cavity was intriguing to me.

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Place: 229 out of 374
Avg (all users): 5.3242
Avg (commenters): 5.7273
Avg (participants): 5.0741
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Views since voting: 828
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Votes: 182
Comments: 12
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/26/2007 07:08:20 PM
subtle abstract look at negative space.
 06/26/2007 01:46:15 PM
For me, I wonder how this would look with the sky cropped out. I like the high contrast between the window and the bright bricks.
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 06/26/2007 02:33:13 AM
Looks like a window where windows once were. If there is more of the orangish brick on either side of this shot then I think I crop out the blue sky at the top and put more of the brick on the left, right and bottom. Your neg space is really the bricks and the sky adds nothing to the shot. That power line is distracting a little but not too badly imo.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/25/2007 09:36:53 PM
A different crop would have made made a dramatic photo imo. Nice colors and concept.
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 06/25/2007 03:45:26 PM
You are the lucky recipient of my 1000th comment.

I don't like the sky and all the wires. They really distract from what is a good image. A crop below the shadow on the top of the wall seems to give this more impact.
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 06/23/2007 12:42:33 PM
Nice shot, good focus and processing. Would have packed a bigger punch (for me) if the sky were cropped out.
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 06/23/2007 12:49:37 AM
i like the contrast b/w the new brick and the old brick but i'm not sure if that's what you were going for...
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 06/23/2007 12:07:28 AM
This is interesting. GREAT colors! Nice detail.
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 06/22/2007 04:45:37 PM
would have been better to cut out the sky
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/20/2007 01:29:44 PM
For me, this might've worked better with the sky cropped out.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/20/2007 01:17:15 PM
A tighter crop to just the building would have been great. the stuff above it is distracting.
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 06/20/2007 01:02:25 AM
perhaps it was not possible but i feel this would have had more impact without the sky and the only the wall, still i like it /7
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