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09/15/2002 01:59:00 PM |
| Great rustic looking background, lighting is pretty subdued. Composition is great, the peel keeps my eye in the picture. |
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09/14/2002 12:14:00 PM |
| Clever idea! A little dark unfortunately. Background on top is distracting since I can't make out what it is, yet it occupies about 25% of the image. You don't need it so you could crop it. I like the surface the apple is on. Good luck in the callenge. Gracious aka Grayce |
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09/14/2002 11:36:00 AM |
| This photo really appeals to me. The composition, the subdued lighting, the textures of the background and the apple. I'm giving it 10 - lisae |
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09/13/2002 11:01:00 PM |
| Neat idea and picture but my monitor shows a lot of loss of detail in the lower right were the shadows are dence and a black blob across the top. Can't hardly wait for square formats. |
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09/13/2002 12:04:00 AM |
| Well arranged composition. The weathered backdrop and roughly peeled apple work well together. I would personally like to see the quarter-tones lightened a bit so the apple might round out a little more. Nice picture. --JPerez |
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09/12/2002 03:42:00 PM |
| It's underexposed, and the background is distracting. |
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09/12/2002 05:23:00 AM |
| This is a superb idea, but there are a few things wrong with the shot. There are two main problems. Firstly, the lighting is very low. While this might be intentional - judging by the title - it doesn't actually work. Primarily, this is because of the background. It's difficult to determine where the subject ends and the background starts. This could be improved by choosing a much brighter (or darker) neutral backdrop. The various scratches, dents and dark shadows distract from the already hard to see central subject. Try using a plain backdrop for the shot to remove the distractions. Next, try lighting the subject with a bounced or heavily diffused flash. White paper held at angle in front of flash unit works quite well – but be careful of your ceiling colour, if it isn't white, you'll get a colour cast. This is only my opinion and I hope I haven't caused offenceâ€Â¦ Good luckâ€Â¦ Keep shootingâ€Â¦ |
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09/11/2002 01:23:00 PM |
| This show quite a bit of creativity on the part of the photographer, but it's too dark and could be a bit sharper. I like the composition, though. |
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09/11/2002 09:29:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 8,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
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09/10/2002 03:20:00 PM |
| A little dark... even if the apple is "undressing". Some of the details are lost. |
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09/10/2002 07:44:00 AM |
| all in all the photo looks a little dark for me, and i'm wondering why you chose the background that you did. it distracts me a little from the apple. interesting title. -- gr8photos. |
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09/10/2002 06:28:00 AM |
| Unattractive background distracts, as does the darker spots on the apple. |
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09/09/2002 10:05:00 PM |
| Your choice of background and light was quite unfortunate. I would have tried a bathroom, or a dressing room. |
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09/09/2002 07:30:00 PM |
Cute idea, was the darkness representing the desire for privacy, or something like that? (If not, it's too dark!) Naked apple! Would this be a PG shot or R?
7 Swash |
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09/09/2002 03:28:00 PM |
| The concept on this photo is interesting... The composition is also nice, but the weak lighting is causing me to struggle just a bit. - jmsetzler |
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09/09/2002 02:54:00 PM |
| Needs a touch more light, I think, but overall a pretty good picture. karmat |
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09/09/2002 11:16:00 AM |
| Good concept...I think the background could've been a little better |
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