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07/31/2007 11:01:15 PM |
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07/31/2007 12:39:28 PM |
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07/31/2007 12:09:09 AM |
Good portrayal of emotion. |
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07/30/2007 08:58:32 PM |
Good idea. Did you try with greater DOF? |
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07/30/2007 04:19:24 PM |
Blurry pounding fist smashing a desk with some evidence would be more convincing, more contrast. |
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07/30/2007 03:16:05 PM |
The theme/idea you've used has potential. It fits the challenge and the photo doesn't need some drawn out title to explain it. The image does need a little more attention to detail IMO. Either the DOF is too shallow or the hand moved a little because the fingers seem blurry. For a B/W photo the tonal range seems short. Your black could be darker and the white a truer white. Some of this could be easily adjusted via a histogram adjustment or a slight bump using curves or levels. A small shot of contrast might help as well. There is also some graininess (or noise) that takes away from the photo. Use a lower ISO, run it thru a noise reduction program, or go all the way on noise and add more intentionally.
Just some observations, and certainly JMO. :D Good luck. |
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