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09/30/2007 10:14:41 PM |
Clever title. Technicals while ok is holding it back. Perhaps just a change in composition would have helped greatly. Shooting from above as you did here, almost always comes across as too ordinary. |
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09/30/2007 07:39:57 AM |
can't figure out what is escaping |
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09/29/2007 06:39:31 PM |
what did you throw the grape while taking the picture
i dont like it |
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09/28/2007 08:01:00 PM |
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09/28/2007 05:38:26 PM |
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09/28/2007 12:17:28 AM |
Nice detail showing. Strong colors, but not overdone. |
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09/27/2007 03:37:26 PM |
Not sure what is trying to escape, the eye is automatically drawn to it whatever it is,nice colours in the lime and tomatoe. |
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09/25/2007 02:46:20 PM |
The tomato is a bit washed out. Great movement in the flying grape. |
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09/24/2007 07:00:32 PM |
Dull composition, and it's hard to tell what the moving object is. |
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09/24/2007 12:43:05 PM |
You have a still life, and you also have the motion with blur. Both of those are the most important aspects of this challenge to me. However, a few attention to details could have really improved this shot.
Clean the plate of dust or clone the spots out. I don't mind the crack on the plate, gives it a rustic appeal. clone out the spot on the tomato and lime. and a better dof would help. the focus seems to be in the wrong spot. Its just barely nipping the lime. you have some good left side light going but it is a little flat. You want to see a highlight on the tomato. The red of the tomato is overpowering the image. Red is aggressive and doesn't need to take up that much space on the shot. a plum tomato or a grouping of cherry/grape tomatoes would have been enough. Some things to think about on your next go. |
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