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The kiss
The kiss
Patrick_R


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Challenge: Intimacy (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: train tracks
Date: Mar 25, 2008
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Mar 25, 2008

 Me and Tiff. This was a fun shoot :)

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Yeah I know about my hand lol. I had to use my remote to shoot this one and it only has a two second timer... I was kicking myself all week for hand in the pocket move but there really wasn't another option at the time.

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Place: 16 out of 117
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Votes: 287
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 05/03/2008 09:50:06 AM
Originally posted by Germaine:
I'm in the minority. That hand doesn't bother me at all. To me, it adds to the shot -- it's a casual, spur of the moment kiss...


Agreed. I think it adds to the relaxed and spontaeous feel of it. She's showing great emotion; he's playing it cool. Great choice of background too -- adds to the story.
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 04/17/2008 10:02:00 AM
I'm in the minority. That hand doesn't bother me at all. To me, it adds to the shot -- it's a casual, spur of the moment kiss. I really like the shot.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/01/2008 10:20:03 PM
OK this is good.Her pose with the raised leg shows some emotion.But dude with his hand in his pocket? Just kills it for me.Maybe crop the dead sky space also. 6
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 04/01/2008 09:38:21 PM
i like the angle on this. nice shot.
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 04/01/2008 07:10:38 PM
The sky appears blown – still one of the best in this challenge! Like your idea of using an un-attractive railcar as a prop.
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 04/01/2008 11:59:27 AM
Love the framing, in fact, it looks as though you placed her just under the circle in the b.g. to make it look like a halo - 9
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 03/31/2008 11:06:13 PM
The composition of this photo is really well done. My only problem is with the guy's hand in his pocket. It looks unnatural to me.
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 03/31/2008 12:35:24 PM
he looks like that guy on american idol
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 03/30/2008 11:20:18 PM
That is sweet shot, awesome background and angles.
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 03/30/2008 07:36:08 PM
Nice image. The train car & the couple just don't seem to fit.
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 03/29/2008 08:22:37 PM
I really like this. I like the female's leg and the position of her arms. I like the juxtaposition of the formal clothing against the rusty train. But I think an even tighter crop - getting rid of the angle of the top of the train car - would draw more focus on the intimate couple against the wonderful textures of the train car.
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 03/29/2008 05:38:12 PM
That's the way to kiss!
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 03/29/2008 07:42:23 AM
The big chunk of blown out sky at the top is distracting. Some fill flash would have been useful here to light up the shadows without blowing out the sky. I would have gotten closer to get just the couple and the train without the sky which adds nothing to the shot. Nice capture and pose otherwise. 8
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 03/28/2008 06:15:01 PM
great angle
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 03/26/2008 11:00:23 PM
I like the grittiness of the scenery against them in their nice clothes. I wonder if a different crop without the sky and his hand not in his pocket, maybe wrapped around her, could have made this even better.
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 03/26/2008 09:41:57 AM
Don't like his right hand, but otherwise love the image.
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 03/26/2008 08:59:39 AM
His hand in his pocket lowers the intimacy of this to me. I like the rust and the "dressed-upness" contrast.
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 03/26/2008 06:27:47 AM
Train makes for a simple yet interesting background. Foot in the air shows some flirt. Daytime makes me wonder if they snuck away from work. His hand in his pocket makes him seem a little more distant and less intimate. Very nice shot.
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 03/26/2008 01:21:22 AM
the hand in pocket bugs me, but I understand that you had to have it there. nice pic!! :)
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