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One of these goes to my house!!!
One of these goes to my house!!!
TommyMoe21


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Chaos (Advanced Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Dupage Co. Il. USA
Date: Apr 3, 2004
Aperture: f/8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Cityscape, Urban
Date Uploaded: Apr 2, 2004

 Resized and levels adjusted. Pretty much "out of camera". Saved for web and unsharpen mask too.

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 04/15/2004 06:58:37 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

What a mess of wires! Are you sure one leads to your house? LOL!

A decent shot overall but it lacks pop. Nothing really jumps out at me and says, "HEY! LOOK AT ME!" A bit more brightness or contrast could really make this shot stand out a bit more. Also, if you could crop it more so there are wires throughout the shot, the upper left corner is free and clear and takes away from the chaos theme you are going for. Maybe a slight rotation to straighten up the poles and more the wires around a bit more?

Hope this helps, if you have any questions, please feel free to email me!

Good Luck In Future Challenges!

Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/11/2004 10:24:09 PM
A photographer's pet peeve...those pesky electric wires. An okay shot, and I understand the connection to chaos, but nothing really interesting here for me.
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 04/11/2004 03:58:27 AM
Portrays chaos well, title is a little eratic, still interesting.
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 04/06/2004 06:08:19 PM
Maybe different point off view from bottom up including whole poles with angled tops will make this photo more interesting.7
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 04/05/2004 05:53:41 PM
its actually a pretty organized system...
looks chaotic here though
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 04/05/2004 05:21:09 AM
What a good picture, chaotic yet not messy. I like it a lot. After the challenge I'm looking forward to seeing what settings and camera you used. Whenever I take a picture that has power lines they tend to get "jaggy" but yours don't do that.
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