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The Mask I Must Wear
The Mask I Must Wear
LadyK


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Challenge: Masks (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF-S 17-55mm f/2.8 IS USM
Location: Dining Room
Date: May 29, 2008
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/80
Galleries: Black and White, Self Portrait
Date Uploaded: May 29, 2008

Me with face paint. lol too much fun lol. taken in my dining room

Statistics
Place: 21 out of 89
Avg (all users): 6.1693
Avg (commenters): 6.7692
Avg (participants): 5.9184
Avg (non-participants): 6.2571
Views since voting: 2018
Views during voting: 360
Votes: 189
Comments: 24
Favorites: 2 (view)


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12/30/2008 02:31:48 PM
Great potential here, but I think I'd have been tempted to up the whiteness / brightness of the background so that the face merged, leaving the eye alone from that side of the face.
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12/27/2008 01:19:31 AM
okie doke... comments commencing.

First thing I notice is how you missed some of the paint in the central line so your skin shows through. Also, if you'd smoothed the paint a bit out (or just used the spot healing brush) on the lumpy parts it would have made it look a lot more 'organic' I suppose.

Second thing I notice is the sort of yellowy tinge around your face. You could have fixed this easily but didn't, and I would have marked it down for this as it's a simple oversight. To fix this, there's a number of ways: carefully dodge the area at around 40% or so on a different layer and erase the parts of the face you blow out because of it; make a levels layer to lighten it; or hell, just use a white brush. Easy, but ignored.

Third thing that gets me is the red around the eyes. Maybe its very irritating paint but it isn't the best look. You could have fixed this in PS by changing the colour of the reds to something a bit nicer looking or by making them black/white in PS also, this could have been done by selectively desaturating it i guess (easiest way).

4- the eyes... they don't really stand out enough. You can see them, but they should always be the focal point of a portrait, and in this they're not impactive enough to really make me look twice at the picture. It's nice enough but the eyes are the key and usually deserve special attention.

On a sidenote i'm not too sure why you went with this pose, it kind of diminishes the effect of having 2 seperate sides to the face. I'm sure you had your reasons but I would have just gone for a full frontal face look, possibly with the head down a bit, eyes looking up to accentuate the eyes (and done what I suggested before), and then probs boosted the ocntrast to make it look a bit more lively and give it a bit of a kick up the arse.

I would have given this a 4, or maybe a 5, not because it's a bad picture but because the potential was seemingly ignored and could have been rectified with more thought and self-critique... not to say it ignored, but i'm a cynical bastard.

Sorry if that came across as harsh and dismissive but thats what I think and thought you would prefer something honest and possibly cutting to the usual "wow, nice job" stuff that is nice, but doesnt help.

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11/24/2008 10:13:09 PM
//en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Let_That_Be_Your_Last_Battlefield
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09/02/2008 08:48:02 AM
Lovely shot...should deserve more. Wow there are 3 dumb people who rated this photo too (who voted 1 for this).
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09/02/2008 12:00:59 AM
wow , great job

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08/21/2008 10:06:30 PM
Love it, like my personality, black and white.... uh, forgot to mention the zillions of shades of grey between?
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07/11/2008 09:24:43 PM
Great processing and lighting on her face :)
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06/09/2008 09:40:56 PM
Originally posted by bvy:

I see a ribbon in your future -- or at least a top 10 here. Terrific. An eight for you.


Thought this would do better. The black makes a convincing profile -- I think some folks missed that. Still a respectable finish and a new personal best, so congrats!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/08/2008 07:22:24 PM
It is interesting that I've come back to this photo several times and stared at it but felt for a lack of words. It seems to remind me of something from my childhood yet I cannot quite grasp the memory. It seems a little troubling to me I'm not sure why, maybe it is the memory maybe the gaze. She looks like she is looking right into me. Lighting and color seem good, the reflection off the black paint is a bit distracting I think. Only other thing is the tiny gap between the two colors. Still a good image. :)
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06/08/2008 02:45:46 PM
I'm getting a bit tired of the painted faces... but this is a really good one. The expression and the shininess... good stuff :)

The background color was a good choice. I would have cropped just a tad bit off of the top to emphasize the eyes more... but your average is probably higher than mine, so I'll bow to your decision. *grin*
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06/07/2008 05:11:55 PM
I like the way you conveyed the fragility of the girl. Great work.
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06/07/2008 01:09:35 PM
Very powerful image. The expression in the eyes is really quite riveting.
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06/06/2008 01:03:47 PM
looks like you have some issues girl!
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06/06/2008 10:02:24 AM
love the face painting and the crop and the pose. I wish the highlights weren't quite so strong on the forehead and under the eye. while it does help shape the head and face, I find it just a little too harsh.
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06/05/2008 03:21:07 PM
great effort - since this was an advanced editing you could have really cleaned up a few smudges (on the lip and right forehead) I personally would have matted both the black and white to a really flat finish, then brought the whiteness of your eyes up. It's a great photo but it's not a home run for me. best of luck.
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06/04/2008 10:24:06 PM
I see a ribbon in your future -- or at least a top 10 here. Terrific. An eight for you.
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06/04/2008 02:27:59 PM
Nice shot - well lit and composed.
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06/03/2008 12:26:07 AM
Very creative!
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06/02/2008 09:16:17 PM
cool shot, looks a little noisy to me though :(
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06/02/2008 08:36:27 PM
Is this the B&W in Color challenge again? Great entry for either!
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06/02/2008 04:43:15 PM
Great contrast. This works really well!
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06/02/2008 05:27:16 AM
Very interesting pic.....I gave you a 6. Good luck
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06/02/2008 03:32:36 AM
I'm not comfortable with the angle of your model's head. It looks a little forced/stiff. Light also seems too harsh with all the shine over the black make-up. More diffusion maybe? Or even some more light coming from lower-right... Don't know, but something's not quite right. Big help, aren't I? :D Good luck!
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06/02/2008 02:00:49 AM
Creative entry. Good luck!
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