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08/18/2008 09:20:04 PM |
she's pretty :) anyway, i think this fits the challenge well, and it's a cute idea.
but the lighting needs some improvement, IMHO. read your description about having only the SB800 flash - perhaps you could try bouncing it off something, like a DIY reflector? or a wall? |
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08/18/2008 01:40:15 PM |
You should have exposed for the ambient light and used the sb800 as fill or to add mood or atmosphere or emotion or drama or just plain shadows. |
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08/18/2008 09:17:19 AM |
the lighting is flat and without the title there's really no context to the challenge. sorry, but i don't see it. |
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08/17/2008 10:33:09 PM |
Interesting, though a slightly odd scene. |
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08/17/2008 05:26:30 PM |
great red dress and lipstick but the lighting seems a bit too harsh and i really don't understand it - maybe i am missing something.... |
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08/16/2008 06:55:22 PM |
I like the cargo containers which help tie this in to the occupation, great looking model and dress, my only criticism is the left edge looks a little distracting making that area darker would have kept my attention on the main subject rather than darting to the background every now and then.
Still a great shot and in my top 5 |
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08/15/2008 08:42:25 PM |
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08/15/2008 02:30:27 AM |
Hah! Nice contradictions. Even the subject of the book.
Hey, wait! That's where my new couch is! |
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08/14/2008 11:53:31 PM |
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08/13/2008 06:41:58 PM |
clever idea for the challenge |
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08/12/2008 11:10:01 PM |
Great concept but the lighting is lacking. Her face is a bit under-lighted. |
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08/12/2008 09:33:54 PM |
LOL! love everything about this shot, just hope the boss doesn't wander in unexpectedly. 9 |
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08/12/2008 09:45:37 AM |
i didnt read that one yet
butgreat idea 7 |
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08/12/2008 12:48:36 AM |
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08/11/2008 09:13:20 PM |
Ok, I'm still chuckling. :) Where do I send my resume? This is a really well thought out concept, and a great shot. |
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08/11/2008 01:16:48 AM |
Wonderful shot, I like the way you isolated the dress, the mood is perfect, and for sure Stephen Kind adds a flavor ;)
nicely done 9 |
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