Challenge:Rusted (Basic Editing I) Camera:Sony DSC-F707 Location: my back yard Date: May 1, 2004 Aperture: 2.0 ISO: 100 Shutter: 800 Date Uploaded: May 4, 2004
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 1
How well does it meet the challenge: 9
Total Averaged Rating 5.25 Dick
Good detail and I like the muted colors. I would like to see more of the object you are photographing. It's too close, I'm not sure if I'm looking at a mail or the handle of something larger. Nice shot overall.
I don't really know what I am looking at.I like the piece of wood on the top but it seems to have an iron spike either through it or under it. I cannot tell which. The shallow depth of field hurts as the piece of wood in the background could add pictorial interest but is far out of focus. The lighting is also quite dim.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 7
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, etc. 8
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 9
Does this picture meet the challenge?(5pts) Yes
Total Challenge Weighted Average 8 Bill
I especially like the similarity in color on the nail and wood.
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