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07/21/2009 01:06:48 PM |
Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club and congratulations on submitting your first entry here at DPC!
First Impression: The 'footwear' fills the frame nicely and a nice touch adding the snail which adds interest to what could easily be a boring subject.
Composition: The square crop works for me here and the centered snail works well.
Tecnical: The Snail is well lit and the oof backgound works well to keep the viewer looking at the subject. Good focus where it needs to be sharp and I'm loving the in focus line along the ground.
Artistic: The sole of the shoe is a little dark on my monitor however whilst it might have hurt you slightly in the voting the more I view the image the more it works for me, the well lit snail is being encompassed by the darkness of being trod underfoot (thats deep for me).
Overall thoughts A fun take on the challenge theme and a more than competent entry. after viewing this for a while I'm now being drawn to the white space on the right of the image and its distracting me slightly. Gave this a 6 during voting btw.
Feel free to contact me if you'd like to discuss this further André. |
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07/16/2009 06:24:05 PM |
It's an interesting idea. I know you gonna score better next time as you're a really good photographer.
Cheers, my friend!
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07/15/2009 12:23:13 AM |
Andre, should scored better, much higher IMO.
Congrats on this great concept |
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07/14/2009 09:42:31 AM |
| Eeeeww. I can't stand the idea even in shoes ever since I accidently stepped on one bare-footed :P Great idea and perspective. |
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07/12/2009 07:59:28 AM |
| poor snail!...but it is a good idea. good luck |
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07/10/2009 11:10:28 PM |
| Very clear picture, although the focus is off somewhat on the snail. I like the concept. |
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07/09/2009 04:54:01 PM |
| Amusing and well executed. |
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07/08/2009 11:00:44 PM |
| Nice capture, watch out for the little guy! |
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07/08/2009 04:35:28 AM |
great concept and execution. hope you missed the snail
(not voting) |
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