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Autumn Rush
Autumn Rush
Pelle


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Challenge: Camera Movement (Basic Editing)
Camera: Konica Minolta Maxxum 5D
Lens: Konica Minolta AF 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6(D) DT
Location: Söderåsen National Park, Skåne, Sweden
Date: Oct 21, 2009
Aperture: f5.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/6
Galleries: Abstract, Nature
Date Uploaded: Oct 23, 2009

 Manually panning vertically with slow exposure in the forest.
The wide angle gave it the unwanted curved effect

Levels
Saturation

Statistics
Place: 12 out of 104
Avg (all users): 6.0450
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 6.1607
Avg (non-participants): 6.0060
Views since voting: 1460
Views during voting: 386
Votes: 222
Comments: 15
Favorites: 1 (view)

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 11/09/2009 11:47:05 PM


Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
Difficult Challenge, nice abstract but the sun/light top left dominates a little too much.

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
You mention the unwanted curved effect, I quite like that (if you're talking about the 'waves'). For me, as mentioned above, the overexposed sky is a fraction too dominant and takes my attention away from the nice flows and colors. Perhaps cropping it out, but as always, your call.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
12th place is very good. Score of 6.04 doesn't seem to match that, but a difficult Challenge with not many entries.

Average of 7.0 from your commenters - all of which seemed to really like the beauty in it. You received one comment with a suggestion about cropping out the top part, so I am not the only one to see/think that.

Summary
The overall visual balance of the movement/lines/color perhaps is a little thrown out by the tree on the left, so I wonder about a variation in cropping/composition - but your call. My favorite part of the image is the two trees/trunks in the center and the colors and movement surrounding them.
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 11/04/2009 12:43:41 AM
wow, this is really nice.
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 11/04/2009 12:27:38 AM
Really love this.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/03/2009 10:40:10 PM
Very lovely.
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 11/03/2009 05:34:12 PM
good painting.
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 11/02/2009 11:17:26 PM
Makes a better photo with the top overexposed bits cropped off.
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 11/01/2009 10:33:14 AM
Very beautiful. Perfect for this challenge.
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 10/31/2009 10:36:40 AM
Love it.
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 10/30/2009 11:51:36 PM
absolutely stunning..
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 10/30/2009 02:50:05 PM
nice colors and feel, like an abstract watercolor. 8
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 10/30/2009 09:04:13 AM
LURVE this!!!! Very painterly.
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 10/28/2009 10:34:55 PM
great colors!
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 10/28/2009 02:57:08 PM
Interesting image! Love the tones and blur! Have you tried cropping it, without the top highlighted section? It could be such a painting. Although it still kicks! 8
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 10/28/2009 05:03:21 AM
One of my fav.
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 10/28/2009 01:55:10 AM
good colors and exposure. I'm glad you chose to motion the camera along the lines of the trees.
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