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01/31/2010 11:04:44 PM |
Good day! You're the recipient of a "critique club" critique! So feel free to take this with a grain of salt :D
First Impression: I'm glad that I received this one to critique -- It's a very well done shot that I enjoyed when voting, but something just wasn't right. What a great opportunity to explore this one further.
Composition: The biggest problem with this image is the disconnect between to the two people. With your title of "not interested", it's fine and perfectly acceptable that he's disconnected/uninterested. But for the picture to be really intriguing, there should be some interaction. If she was only looking at him, putting a hand out to him, somehow trying to catch his eye, then there would be so much more of a story. Right now it is two separate pictures. I do agree with an earlier commenter, he'd be much more interesting by himself. At this moment, she's just a distraction. If she was working into the story, that would be a different matter.
Subject: As above: the man is very interesting, the woman doesn't add much. Wonderful spot, though!
Technical: You did the technicals exceedingly well. I like the chosen angle, the lighting and processing are very nice.
Final thoughts: I gave this a 7 in the voting, I did find it intriguing, however the man by himself would have scored an 8 or 9 from me. |
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01/29/2010 07:36:03 AM |
OMG I love this! Excellent study on contrast: old vs. young, male vs. female, posed vs. authentic, dominant vs. restrained, overconfident vs. modest and so on...
It's such a strange situation it's got to go into my favs! |
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01/28/2010 11:30:59 PM |
| Lovely model and he seems to not even realize what's going on!! Maybe it's the angle of the shot but she appears to be a tall model. I'm curious of her height? Nevertheless still a great photo. BB |
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01/28/2010 08:34:49 PM |
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01/28/2010 02:41:13 PM |
| Okay. It seems you're trying to appeal to two different demographics with this shot, and the title works in this regard. I personally would have voted you higher if you had only one of them in the shot. My preference would be to eliminate the girl because I think the old man against the old door makes more of a statement. Of course the men out there would much rather see the eye candy. |
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01/28/2010 01:17:59 PM |
| Very interesting shot. Never seen anything quite like this. |
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01/27/2010 09:11:30 PM |
| She's gorgeous, he's a study in character, but IMNSHO, they done belong in the same image......6 |
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01/27/2010 09:11:05 PM |
| I am ! , no seriously I like the contrast between the human elements, 7 |
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01/27/2010 12:46:57 PM |
| Oblivious! That's pretty funny. |
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01/27/2010 06:14:05 AM |
| this one just makes me smile - while as a man I should be drawn to the model, the face and intensity of the old man wins the day here |
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01/26/2010 09:05:38 AM |
Clearly he is interested... he has wood ;)
Nice photo, made a great image by the juxtaposition of age and youth, male and female, decay and beauty. It tell a story. Bravo. |
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01/25/2010 11:31:38 AM |
| that speaks contrast to me, a very young and beautiful woman next to a somber old man. |
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01/25/2010 10:11:57 AM |
| This is somewhat disturbing to me. Makes me feel sorry for the old guy, and it makes me wonder what the point is here. |
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01/25/2010 10:01:32 AM |
| somewhere in Peru?! great shot ... |
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01/24/2010 07:58:27 PM |
| great lighting and good clarity. you done good |
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01/24/2010 02:47:28 PM |
there were times..he thinks to him self..which my stick was harder then this one.. :)
great one! maybe B&W could work here even better. |
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01/24/2010 12:48:02 PM |
| I think he'd rather be fishing. Italy? Nice work. |
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01/24/2010 11:51:19 AM |
| Humorous, the old gentleman must have the stick because he is blind. Technicality the image is great, but I feel there are too many elements in it. The beautiful model with the rusty doorway would have been enough. |
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01/24/2010 04:44:29 AM |
| I never want to get old! Maybe he was just blind, hence the stick? ;) |
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01/23/2010 10:48:23 PM |
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01/23/2010 10:33:32 PM |
| Too soft, low contrast for me. The concept is nice, might try again with more interesting light, better focus. |
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01/23/2010 07:57:18 PM |
| The old guy seems to have a bit of an amused look on his face, and wouldn't you just! |
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01/23/2010 07:12:25 PM |
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01/23/2010 10:15:15 AM |
| great shot here... i like the contrst between the old man and the girl, great idea, but i like everything. Many many compliments! |
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01/23/2010 06:23:18 AM |
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01/23/2010 02:33:32 AM |
| great idea. I wish that the model had a bit more light on her. |
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01/23/2010 01:09:08 AM |
| That's funny--he could care less! |
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01/22/2010 05:47:19 PM |
| Talk about a contrast! Very quirky. |
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01/22/2010 04:37:35 PM |
| Maybe he is just taking his time getting to notice her :) She is gorgeous... great shot. |
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01/22/2010 01:57:34 PM |
LOL this is just a wonderful image. Can I have her legs in my next life?? Lovely girl and he is just oblivious ...
Love it!!! |
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01/22/2010 11:56:03 AM |
| This looks like a Viagra ad - "don't you wish you had some?" or the one where you can take it and be ready "when you want to" LOL The only thing I would have done different is t burn the right side - it is a bit bright but still a great shot and your model "brought it"! |
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01/22/2010 03:38:56 AM |
| He has learnt thyat true beauty come from within... Nice shot |
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01/22/2010 12:42:14 AM |
whats wrong with him lol
nice i like his expression |
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