Greetings from the Critique Club!
Interesting image. I imagine the title and elephants have significance for you, but here it is lost on the viewer. Is Marfill an elephant? A location? Is there a story to be told by entitling it Marfill? As they say, a photo is worth a thousand words, so give what you have at your disposal - your elephant statues and studio and LEDs - a story to tell.
Technically, the composition is quite centred and focus appears soft, though I do like the dof and shadows cast by the figures. And as you likely had a tripod for an 8-second capture, why use such a high ISO? Most LEDs, which are popular with those that like painting with light, give off quite good light on their own. I believe an ISO of 200 would have been adequate, and helped cut down on the background light glare.
The only to improve is to keep on shooting, and never be afraid to mess with the settings. Experiment and see what works and what doesn't. But above all, keep shooting!
Feel free to PM me with any questions,
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