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02/23/2010 11:28:06 PM |
| This was my pic for blue, I just love it. |
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02/22/2010 07:40:28 PM |
Thank you very much for the warm comments and honest feedback. I really appreciate your comments and I will try to improve accordingly :) Thanks again so much.
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02/22/2010 06:08:07 PM |
Hey Lorenz - congrats on the top 5 finish and Honourable Mention.
Lovely shot, as are the rest of the Arab Street shots. |
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02/22/2010 03:00:38 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impressions are her stare ... right at me ... very unnerving!
Technically there is not much I can say. This is a great shot and the HM proves it.
Artistically this is great but there are a few things that bother me. First, the catchlight in her eye is quite distracting I find. Second, I find three is too much of her hand in the frame, maybe crop in a bit or have her other eye exposed but obscured by the leaves? I also find the abundance of foreground blur to be a little too much.
In summary a great shot, a great score, what more can I say.
Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry |
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02/22/2010 10:41:54 AM |
A 7+ and no ribbon... *sigh*
Congrats on a beautiful image and the HM. |
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02/22/2010 03:21:01 AM |
| I love shots like this, well done |
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02/22/2010 01:19:11 AM |
| Unbelievable detail! Congrats on 5th. |
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02/22/2010 12:41:06 AM |
| hi thanks to everyone who voted.. this was exciting and helpful and at the same time unexpected.. somehow as i am still in the newbie stage. thanks so much again :) |
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02/22/2010 12:26:56 AM |
| Nice work...congrats on HM! |
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02/22/2010 12:15:35 AM |
| Woo hoo!! Congrat Lorentz , knew this would do great. |
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02/22/2010 12:11:52 AM |
| Congrats on the HM... PB... |
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02/22/2010 12:05:09 AM |
| Congrats! I really wanted this to ribbon! Argg!!! Congrats! Strong finish! |
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02/21/2010 11:36:12 PM |
| The light and colortone is awesome. I really love that the focus is on her eyes and mouth. |
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02/21/2010 12:55:08 PM |
| Very Autumnal feel to this - nice work though ! |
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02/21/2010 12:52:03 AM |
| This should easily finish as a ribbon! |
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02/18/2010 03:06:00 AM |
| it gives me an overall feeling of natural |
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02/17/2010 12:59:52 PM |
| A really well done photo, but one thing bothers me about it a lot. Her headwear is natural leaves, but her face is covered in heavy makeup. It seems contradictory. Perhaps a contradictory image was your intention, but it's not carrying across to me that way.I personally would have found a lighter hand on the makeup to suit the idea better. Still well done, and worth a vote on the positive side. |
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02/16/2010 07:22:49 PM |
| Great dof, and very interesting "headwear" :-) Especially the tiny tendril in focus to the left. |
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02/15/2010 12:17:40 PM |
| stunning! what a Goddess portrait! the green background is exactly perfect with the head dress and your model is stunningly georgeous! I love this if I were voting this would be a 9 or 10 |
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02/15/2010 06:34:01 AM |
| Fantastic shot, lovely model. A bit too much flashlight in her eye but still worth 8 |
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02/15/2010 06:15:17 AM |
| Has Librodo-like qualities, but I guess you are getting a lot of comments like that? I think that the crop on the bottom is a little harsh. |
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02/15/2010 05:50:47 AM |
| creative and technicality are awesome here 9. |
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02/15/2010 05:17:29 AM |
| This is stunning. Makes me think of Autumn. |
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02/15/2010 02:51:27 AM |
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02/15/2010 02:12:47 AM |
| Beautiful smoothness and yet crisp. She's got such a wonderful eye shape. |
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