| Author | Thread |
|
|
04/06/2010 06:59:55 PM |
Hi from Critique Club.
I like you photo, but lost my focus when searching it visual elements.
Ideas for better image:
1 - The background lines may be ajusted to the horizon;
2 - A good crop to focus more in the center of the action;
3 - More light.
Look here how you photo may be: //sites.google.com/site/photoscritiqueclub/ .
Hope you like my ideas.
Oscar Burd |
|
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
03/28/2010 12:34:29 AM |
| Good one! Would have been even better with a tighter crop! |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
03/24/2010 02:31:06 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
03/24/2010 12:33:02 PM |
| Great shot. Hard to get good lighting in the gym. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Prints! -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/27/2024 01:30:09 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
