Greetings from the Critique Club!
She did indeed make the shot! Without her you have a nice geometric pattern/design that is quite interesting, but with her you add that all important sense of scale and a bit of a sense of how grandiose we humans are when we build things like this. Nicely framed, though if I were to pick a nit, it would be to add just a wee bit more on the top - ie include all of the rail, although I suspect the space and lens limitations may have prevented that.
A good shot, I think, and pretty good for the challenge, though I might argue it would have worked in Exit as well or better. As for processing, looks pretty good to me - nice light touch with the Topaz (I'd not have guessed it was used.) Did you try it in B&W at all? Not sure it would work better, as I do like the beige-ish/brown-ish palette here. I'd also not have guessed you used a flash - nice work with that, too!
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