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12/18/2002 03:37:37 PM |
Hi Binni, Greetings from the Critique Club };-)
Initial thoughts
Nice color but a bit overexposed
Composition/ Content
A lot of negative space that doesn't seem to help the shot much. Because the Vespa itself is a bit blown out, the over abundence of white space doesn't seem to help it.
Background
Like it is noted above, the background seems a little too overexposed.
Camera Work - Technical
It is a little hard to tell exactly what we are looking at here. The Vespa doesn't have enough definition to really tell much.
Digital Processing - Technical
I am assuming that most of this shot was done on the computer and not in camera. The exposure has been noted. In addition, I noticed that you are only at 63kb instead of the 150kb allowed by the rules. Although it may not have hurt you much here it is a good practice to use as many pixels as possible.
Fits The Challenge
Seems to fit the challenge as there is a feeling of motion.
My Opinion On The Photo I originally scored this shot a four as did most of the voters. I think that it meets the challenge but is a bit too "artistic" for this site. I noticed that this is your first submission. Welcome to DPC! Be sure and browse the photos, tutorials and "How'd They Do That" areas. I have learned so much here in a relatively short time. Good luck, and keep plugging.
DougPaz
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12/15/2002 11:37:22 AM |
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12/13/2002 05:12:27 AM |
| I think as this is already pretty blown out, the extra white space top and left dont really help. |
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12/13/2002 02:17:18 AM |
| Too much "blank" space, but I like the color and motion effect. |
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12/10/2002 03:27:42 PM |
| i wish this wasnt sooo over exposed. |
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12/09/2002 08:55:06 PM |
| This is an interesting effect, I like it and it makes me look for longer than normal. Not sure that the motion effect is clear enough but its a good attempt at something different, very creative! Good Luck! |
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12/09/2002 06:48:13 PM |
| This your arach? I like it...prepare to get voted all to hell. |
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12/09/2002 09:34:08 AM |
| a little overexposed maybe? |
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